The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates amount of global water use in three different subjects between 1900 and 2000, while the table shows water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
In general, the agriculture by using water about 3000 Km3 in 2000 has highest global consumption among these three subjects, In Brazil because of its population water consumption had 359 m3 in 2000.
As can be seen, every tree subjects have slight increased. By 1900 to 1910 domestic use and industrial use had have near competition with each other that industrial use increased more than domestic and it shows global have toward to industrial, while agriculture has most water use from 1900 to 2000. It shows this issue has an important location and governments notice this. It is true that the irrigated land and population have relation with water consumption. Brazil with 26500 Km2 use 359 m3 while Congo with 100 Km2 used only 8 m3 water these two countries had ordered 176 and 5.2 million population.
As a result, agriculture has an especial place among of other subjects and the line graph shows it clearly, and Brazil consumption water more than Congo because of its population and irrigated land in 2000.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...e by using water about 3000 Km3 in 2000 has highest global consumption among these three su...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...910 domestic use and industrial use had have near competition with each other that i...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in general, as a result, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94527363184 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60615801564 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7062349774 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.125 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196199229118 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907880459675 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670190586704 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143583577201 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452010412883 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in general, as a result, it is true

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