Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this state-of-the-art world, globalization has brought about the proliferation of commercial and cultural exchange between nations. Addressing this, divergent views have been sparked on whether it assists the country’s progression or consequently leads to the erosion of traditional values. The following essay will cover both stances as well as express my perspective.
On the one hand, it is comprehensible that the endangerment of national identification may stem from the excessive sharing of cultural virtues. Since globalization has boosted reciprocity between cultures, some obsolete traditions or customs will be supplanted by emergent ones that comply with modern standards. This results in cultural assimilation, which seriously threatens the identity of certain norms. In addition to this, the contemporary young generation is inclined to follow and practice other countries’ traditions rather than their own. Western culture serves as an exemplary case, particularly due to the worldwide influence of its music industry, being embraced by a majority of the global population. In this sense, those individuals are likely to abandon their indigenous cultures while focusing on foreign virtues. Accordingly, they will disregard their ancestral heritage, and obsolescence is inevitable.
On the other hand, I align with advocates of the viewpoint that the burgeoning exchange between nations in terms of business and culture engenders benefits that surpass any associated detriments. To begin, globalization affords individuals to expand their comprehension of other countries’ unique values through immersion, thereby considerably broadening their horizons. Besides that, regarding the flourishing trade in myriad forms, the commercial industry is a direct beneficiary. Due to the increasing exchange and collaboration among countries, companies’ goal will be to co-produce and share resources, services, information, and support, hence yielding lucrative profits. Ultimately, such synergy will stimulate economic growth, concurrently enhancing the international relationships of these nations.
All things considered, while the disappearance of national identity may underlie reciprocal exchange and marketing activities, I am partial to the view that this situation is synonymous with developments in various ways.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...itage, and obsolescence is inevitable. On the other hand, I align with advocate...
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...tional relationships of these nations. All things considered, while the disappe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, consequently, hence, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20245398773 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36697490405 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662576687117 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.797730777 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.375 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249947455421 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688118140243 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341517319081 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136526605559 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283848744316 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.68 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...following essay will cover both stances as well as express my perspective. On the one ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces as well as express my perspective. On the one hand, it is comprehensible th...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itage, and obsolescence is inevitable. On the other hand, I align with advocate...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tional relationships of these nations. All things considered, while the disappe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, consequently, hence, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20245398773 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36697490405 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662576687117 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.797730777 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.375 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249947455421 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688118140243 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341517319081 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136526605559 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283848744316 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.68 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.