Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
You should write at least 150 words.
The table demonstrates the percentage of five most popular fast food consumed by the people of Malbourne in the year of 2005 and at present. It also includes the future projection of this trend for the year of 2025.
Overall, hambuger, and fried chicken are the highly eaten fast food for 2005 and now, and it remains to be in the same way in 2025. Conversely, salad, fried rice, and noodles were least popular in the year of 2005. However, the trend to cosume salad increased significantly, whereas fried rice and noodles showed slow steady rise.
In 2005, the consumption rate of hambuger and fried chicken were the most, at 40 and 35 units respectively. The figure does not display much difference in present day. Consequently, salad which was eaten only 5 units in 2005 shows moderate increase and becomes tripled now. The rest two catagory of foods fried rice and noodles shows a little growth in their units from 2005, 9 and 8 units each.
In 2025, hambuger and fried chicken will continued to be in the lead. On the other hand, salad consuption is estimated to be eight times more than 2005. The number for fried rice and noodle will show little to none.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: continue
...n 2025, hambuger and fried chicken will continued to be in the lead. On the other hand, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, however, if, so, whereas, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69417475728 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41979944467 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5783694425 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5833333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0567252107699 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245839452334 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314607585327 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044237448371 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443531312471 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.