You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the changing trend of five different fast foods which are eaten by the inhabitants of Melbourne from 2005 to date and also predicts how it is going to look like in 2025.
Overall, it can be seen from the emergent data that for all types of fast food categories it has increased in the number of units and is also forecast to be a rise in the future. People have consumed hamburgers and fried chicken the most till today and are also estimated to go up further whereas salad gained attraction now and continued to be the same way.
For hamburgers and fried rice, in 2005 people in Melbourne, consumed 40 and 35 units respectively which has showed a mere difference of 2 units for both the items. Although for the hamburgers it decreased, for fried rice, it has risen 2 units. These figures again will go up in future prediction in 2025 by 13 and 8 units.
On the other hand, the salad was the least preferred fast food in 2005. Only, 5 units were consumed in that year which has jumped three times at present-day and is estimated to go up almost 8 times the initial value in 2025. Nevertheless, the provided result for the rest two items, fried rice, and noodles, are all-time below 10 units
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n now and continued to be the same way. For hamburgers and fried rice, in 2005 p...
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Line 7, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and noodles, are all-time below 10 units
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51351351351 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48867249514 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563063063063 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0413126348 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0630414806865 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285716137837 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322556809278 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470227757028 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335096769427 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.