You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighbourhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the changing rooms. Write to the gym manager. In your letter:
explain who you are
describe the problem exactly
make suggestions to improve the gym
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my concern in your gym. My name is Gajodhar and have joined this gym a few weeks before. Just to mention, I am member of 3 other gym including this one.
First of all, it is been noticed that some people do not maintain the social norms at this gym like not cleaning the machines after use. Sometimes, few use the benches and throw the unclean towels or cloth on the same place. This is not fair to ignore the guidlines. Besides, even the trainers never ask to follow the rules.
As I am a hygiene fitness enthusiast, I like to work on the clean equipment. I would like to advice on starting to impose fine to who do not maintain the decorum. Furthermore, you can also keep a cleaner who monitors and maintains the place.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Gajodhar
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2024-01-09 | mehjabin | 73 | view |
| 2020-07-15 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 79 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gym' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'gyms'.
Suggestion: gyms
...Just to mention, I am member of 3 other gym including this one. First of all, i...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun use seems to be countable; consider using: 'few uses'.
Suggestion: few uses
...ning the machines after use. Sometimes, few use the benches and throw the unclean towel...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...to advice on starting to impose fine to who do not maintain the decorum. Furthermor...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ins the place. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Thanking you in antic...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, look, so, thus, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52380952381 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45674023095 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.427083293 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.2857142857 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293146983811 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083847359976 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731471612121 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145039788526 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723631713192 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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