Many people believe that it is better to learn something in a group rather than individually.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The issue of finding the most effective method of studying has always remained relevant among concerned learners. Proceeding from this, an opinion exists that it is more convenient to acquire something in a team comparing to individual learning. I completely disagree to above mentioned point of view due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
First of all, private education assumes the selection of optimal studying temp which means that teacher and pupil might regulate the timetable and volume of the upcoming lessons. Usually class consists of the individuals with different intellectual background which leads to the situation when smarter people might be bored. In the opposite, sometimes those who obtain new information slower than others may be shy to mention that they are missing the time. For example, according to the statistics in Russia an average school lesson is constructed to satisfy the needs of a regular pupil, therefore stronger and weaker schoolchildren are not matching the lecture structure. Hence, personal training provides a person with opportunity to create the perfect studying session which is able to cover all their preferences.
Besides that, individual learning does not include obstacles in the forms of distractors as bullying, gossips, undesirable communications and other similar things. While remembering school times, a lot of adults point that they faced the cruelty shown by their classmates. Obviously, this atmosphere negatively affects the educational process and destroys the self-esteem and inner state of the teenager. For instance, well-known Russian psychologist Ludmila Petranovskaya conducted her research referring to this topic where she described the reasons and consequences of school bullying. Thus, some children might feel more protected under conditions of private studying without contacting their abusive peers.
To conclude, I believe that individual schooling is the most effective way to seize new data due to the opportunity to choose optimal pace and avoid brutal people. The former allow the pupils to create balanced studying schedule whereas the latter assists to save the inner peace and harmony which is crucial for effective studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64371257485 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87776886826 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661676646707 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5425638358 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981215701785 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296570499375 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270578066367 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592909095499 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250895482664 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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