The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicts the percentage of four different age groups attending cinemas in the UK from 1990 to 2010.

The youngest age group, 14-24 years, consistently shows the highest attendance rates, experiencing a substantial increase from just over 30% in 1990 to nearly 60% by 2010. The 25-34 age group also shows an upward trend but at a more modest rate, ending around the 35% mark in 2010. Attendance among the 34-44 age group remains relatively stable, with minor fluctuations around the 25% level. Lastly, the 44-54 age group shows the lowest attendance throughout the period, with a slight increase towards the end of the period, reaching just under 20%.

Overall, cinema attendance in the UK within these age groups shows an upward trend for the younger populations, while older age groups maintain a steadier or slightly increasing pattern of attendance.

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