Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose. Others believe that it is merely a distraction from real life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Creativity and the skill of art goes side by side. Art has been given a lot of importance, however, this topic reveals that, there are some people who believe that art could only be a mere hobby and it does not have any meaning. I will examine all the dimensions of this topic with examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one hand, people support art as a meaningful activity, because art teaches creativity as it allows the individual to freely use their thoughts and ideas. In addition, art could also be a profession for some people. For example, the artisans who sell handicrafts and famous painters like Leonardo the Vinci.
On the contrary, there are some people who believe that could only be a distraction or leisure activity. The main reason is busy lifestyle, as people nowadays are so busy in their day to day life to earn money that they treat art as hobby. Another reason is that art does support financially. For instance a recent survey in India showed that 89% of people do not choose art as profession because it is low income profession.
Nevertheless, weighing both the sides of the opinions. I believe that an effective clap requires the use of both the hands, therefore I take the ground that, although art improve various skills like open minded thinking and creativity but it being a low wage profession make it just a choice of hobby. I believe government should advertise the importance of art.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...fession make it just a choice of hobby. I believe government should advertise the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72047244094 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59912004549 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6104721949 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198888085762 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720070284944 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488572984447 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121981574028 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273068612038 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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