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After four years studying in the field of Mechanical Engineering at Isfahan University of Technology (IUT), one of the Iran’s leading engineering institutes, and joining army to complete my military service, now I want to further my curiosity and undertake graduate studies in Mechanical Engineering at Bilkent University.

After passing core courses of Mechanical engineering especially on Fluid Mechanics, Heat Transfer and knowing about Computational Fluid Dynamics (CFD), I completely obsessed by computational sciences. I voluntarily attended to a CFD group for B.S. students at Mechanical Engineering Department of IUT. Later on, I felt I should gain some practical experience working on a real industrial project. Therefore, I consulted with my supervisor and chose a real industrial CFD project as my B.S. dissertation. I soon realized that, although I enjoy applying numerical techniques in order to solve challenging engineering problems and processing the results, I am not going to be satisfied carrying out routine procedures without a deeper insight & authority. So, not only I found myself able to further my studies toward a graduate degree but also my teachers, friends and on top of them my brother encouraged me to continue my way.

At undergraduate level, my interests became more focused. It was Fluid Mechanics and Computational Science and Engineering that really captured my interest. I was fortunate to have good educational environment and excellent professors. I found that Computational Science and Engineering was an interdisciplinary undertaking. Today you need a foundation in Fluid Mechanics, Heat Transfer and several languages of Computer Programming to be at the forefront in this subject. This interdisciplinary aspect of the subject suits my abilities well. I have always performed well in all science subjects and find it challenging to apply the pure knowledge to practical problems. For this reason I chose to undertake an industrial project on my final year of presence at IUT on CFD Investigation of a Vortex tube and optimizing the geometric features of this device. My supervisor was impressed with my theoretical and practical skills and looked forward to hearing from me about the final results.

Many people have asked me why I did not proceed directly to graduate studies after graduating and passing Iran’s National M.S. entrance exam. The answer is that I wanted to make sure that I had chosen the right subject and the right place before embarking on a course of study that would involve many years of my life. The three years gap has also given me time to study about thrilling subjects and improving my English proficiency. At last, I decided to choose Turkey for my study due to having much opportunities with a great environment.

Now I am trying to achieve a funded M.S. position in Bilkent University under Prof.Biancofiore supervisor, working on fluid mechanics problems involving phase change, complex rheology and fluid-structure interaction.

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not only I found myself able to further my studies toward a graduate degree but also my teachers, friends and on top of them my brother encouraged me to continue my way.
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Today you need a foundation in Fluid Mechanics, Heat Transfer and several languages of Computer Programming to be at the forefront in this subject.
Today we need a foundation in Fluid Mechanics, Heat Transfer and several languages of Computer Programming to be at the forefront in this subject. //'we' is better

to having much opportunities with a great environment.
to having many opportunities with a great environment.

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