The line graph illustrate the proportion of the population in 4 countries between 1970 and 2020, with predicted figures for 2030 and 2040.
Overall, what stands out from the line graph is that all countries will witness a dramatic increase in the populations, with Malaysia being predicted to see the greatest growth.
In 1970. the Philippines and Malaysia had the highest proportion of urban population, stood at around 32% and 30% respectively. The number of urban residents in both countries then experienced a moderate increase to around 48% in the Philippines, surpassed by the Malaysian at 46% in 1990. From 2000 onwards, in the Malaysia the figure will continue increasing dramatically and reach a peak of over 85% in 2040, the figure in Malaysia fluctuated before growing to around 55% at the end of period.
Regarding to Thailand and Indonesia, Thailand’s city population made up just two-third of 2 countries mentioned before, while in Indonesia, the figures stood at just below Thailand’s with 13% in 1970. Over thirty years, the proportion of people that lived in cities in both countries experienced a gradual growth to the same level at just below 30% in 2000. Then, the population is predicted to go up to around 62% in Indonesia and around 48% in Thailand in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02803738318 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91465945848 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518691588785 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3839139502 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26361089609 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125664695322 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113356675581 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197111686209 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131952595325 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.