The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other s countries in 2011 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table chart give information about the number of people moving to other countries among five countries for living in 2011.
Overall, it can be seen that the total in British was highest among five countries. Meanwhile in polish was lowest but Italian was higher second after British. However, we can see clearly if we look at the specific decline.
Look at the table chart in first three countries including British, Germany and Italian. In Germany people tends to living to Polish was highest ( 550,000 people). Meanwhile, others moving to Germany and Italian was stable ( 297,000 and 119,000 people). However, Spanish was lowest (71,000 people). The number of people in Germany and Italian didn’t have many different the total in Germany was 1,198,000 and the places that people choose to moving highest was Italian and Polish ( 556,000 and 426,000). Meanwhile, the total in Italian just had 196,000.
Regarding the Polish community, the Polish was highest among five countries in total ( 6,000) but in Spanish they are significantly higher about 861,000 people. The data underscores the interconnectedness of these nations through migration and the diverse expatriate communities present with each country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to moving highest was Italian and Polish 556,000 and 426,000. Meanwhile, the tota...
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...as highest among five countries in total 6,000 but in Spanish they are significan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34210526316 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57792138561 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515789473684 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6639136093 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5833333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124919285172 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569122828068 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861635147793 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120080638699 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12274351869 0.0819641961636 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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