Many people in the past were living in small village where every person knew each other.Today many people live in considerable big city where very less people know each other in their community.It is my believe that" living in a small community" has both pros and cons and is similar to coin has two side.
On the one hand,small villages are the heart of our city.Most people who retired and want to live in a peaceful area.They usually buy house in small village for to enjoy their rest of life.Also the rates of house in big city are very expensive in comparison to small village.Living in small community is not only feels you relaxing but also you feel delightful to live in rural area.Small villagers are social and they have their own community where they can talk about farming issues.Also they help each other in bad situation.For instance,if someone lost their all crops in flooding in the farm and facing crisis,all neighbours help to build his/her economical condition so that he/she can regrow crops in the farm.
On the other hand ,life in small village is not flexible to live.Because government provide very few facilities and benefits to villagers.To give a clear example, less networking system due to very few power stations,education is only up to primary level and they have to find further education in big cities.The main issue is mode of transport because it does not have any fix time to reach into rural area .Ultimately rural area are less developed and most of the villagers migrate into big cities to find job and improve their economical condition.
To sum up,I believe that living in small village give many positive effects than its negative but if we look at development is decreasing ,this is the reason why many people are living in big cities.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'for instance', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235294117647 0.247107548796 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.176470588235 0.15552993741 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.151702786378 0.0946569551029 160% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0526315789474 0.0437536398559 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120743034056 0.122223957237 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0185758513932 0.0403219363162 46% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.71129199389 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0433436532508 0.0326786765898 133% => OK
Particles: 0.0030959752322 0.00163938923432 189% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0650154798762 0.0861751148067 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0061919504644 0.0214082191602 29% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.015479876161 0.0119246538136 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1782.0 1933.38276553 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 316.052104208 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80456026059 6.10592293882 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20519365927 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277777777778 0.37474360046 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222222222222 0.284197041944 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156862745098 0.203843217982 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127450980392 0.137313986986 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71129199389 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.560935902166 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.1108791362 60.7401812628 97% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0911823647 25% => OK.
Sentence length: 76.5 20.7725350517 368% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 203.041867604 49.5273876611 410% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 22.9935483871 93.4120437189 25% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 3.94838709677 15.2821509519 26% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.103225806452 0.594174754866 17% => OK.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01102204409 499% => Too many language errors. Double check essay format, grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 98.7222222222 49.1922392462 201% => OK
Elegance: 1.34444444444 1.69127372897 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.446227600718 0.332604825255 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.300563537155 0.102734651613 293% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0860717791666 0.0668474354756 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534917948617 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.35513868803e-16 0.148666948902 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.309857005148 0.13441755203 231% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124540753124 0.0742828286743 168% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342617603483 0.324241079732 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.099907905799 0.0640056729886 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309857005148 0.22793763319 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124540753124 0.0582452615562 214% => No connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41883767535 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.88977955912 34% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 10.493987976 38% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 61.4505494505 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9
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