Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to.
Many people argue that, success of a person depends on his/her native place. In my opinion, native place plays pivotal role in attitude, capability and determination of an individual.
Every individual has different native places where they get influenced by neighborhood, school friends, culture and various customs of the society. It will have great impact on individual's psychology and development factor. Apart from that, a person will be in a comfort zone while in native place, he has lot of options to unleash his talent. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi learnt all his leadership quality from his surrounding imminent personalities.
But this cannot be the thumb rule for all the successful persons, there are various entrepreneurs who developed their skills and capability while they are away from their native place. In addition to that, an individual may met lot of different people with different culture and attitude and learn from them. For an illustration, let us take the case of Dhirubhai Ambani, he developed all his skills and business whilst away from native. Now he is in top rank of Indian entrepreneurs list.
So to conclude that, a person become successful based on his/her dedication and potentials but native place may add an value his destiny.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...and potentials but native place may add an value his destiny.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.282608695652 0.247107548796 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.113043478261 0.15552993741 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.095652173913 0.0946569551029 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0260869565217 0.0501201869031 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0739130434783 0.0437536398559 169% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126086956522 0.122223957237 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0173913043478 0.0403219363162 43% => More participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.86642547487 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0130434782609 0.0326786765898 40% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0782608695652 0.0861751148067 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0217391304348 0.0214082191602 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00869565217391 0.0119246538136 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1272.0 1933.38276553 66% => OK
No of words: 205.0 316.052104208 65% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17475728155 6.10592293882 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20519365927 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40487804878 0.37474360046 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282926829268 0.284197041944 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190243902439 0.203843217982 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141463414634 0.137313986986 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86642547487 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.560935902166 109% => OK
Word variations: 59.898521278 60.7401812628 99% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0911823647 68% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6363636364 20.7725350517 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5053249411 49.5273876611 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7777777778 93.4120437189 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.4398148148 15.2821509519 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.594174754866 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01102204409 40% => OK
Readability: 46.9290465632 49.1922392462 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.69127372897 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.224918501899 0.332604825255 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0648599149103 0.102734651613 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.032240047898 0.0668474354756 48% => Sentences are so close to each other.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548892086493 0.534917948617 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191036697558 0.148666948902 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097511545462 0.13441755203 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588152026708 0.0742828286743 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.252583658855 0.324241079732 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0634531534169 0.0640056729886 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159979858706 0.22793763319 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232277576801 0.0582452615562 40% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.88977955912 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.60220440882 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => OK
Total topic words: 2.0 10.493987976 19% => More topic words wanted.
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9