Today's work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. i am dis agree with this statement because there are several reason for that. now a days world giving important to work quickly as well as with out any single mistake.
first of all, now a days technology are well developed even if any one making single mistakes also detectable, so they can't do any mistakes even if they are doing some mistakes quantitative and quality controller easily identify the mistake and the rectify the mistake as well as the the controller gives warning to those made that product. so it's highly impossible make risk making.
previously there is no much technological advancement the so that there was lot mistakes and error happened even though they do their slowly and carefully. and that leads to less productivity, now a days the technology improved lot so now day world , it is important to quick and risk less work.
for example, previously transport vehicle are less saftey, even they drive the vehicle some times met accident due to technological disadvantage and it further leads to reduce production and delay the transportation and even major accident too.
because of the improvement in the technique now a days transportation are very fast at the same time safety also improved lot more .one research article said that before 2000 the flight accident rate was 10 percent but after improved the technology and safety method at 2010 to 2014 there was no single accident.
it all shows that the today's not only focus on work has to be done quickly but also reduced the risks and mistakes day by day.
to sum up, i n today's world, people not only concentrating to do the quickly but also concentrating on the safety and reducing the mistakes.
last but not least, now a days people not only working fast, the improved their over productivity.this ability is our national asset which improve our economics worldwide there is no doubt in that. so i am dis agreeing the above mentioned statement.
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Suggestion: nowadays
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Suggestion: the
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Suggestion: the; the
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Suggestion: So
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Suggestion: Previously
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216836734694 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.163265306122 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816326530612 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.125 0.046263068375 270% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.030612244898 0.0685040099705 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0841836734694 0.118717715034 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0357142857143 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8277473547 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280612244898 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00255102040816 0.00188951952338 135% => OK
Determiners: 0.104591836735 0.0887237588012 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00255102040816 0.0209618222197 12% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00255102040816 0.0139019557991 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2096.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 350.0 408.028673835 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98857142857 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314285714286 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248571428571 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182857142857 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117142857143 0.112833075102 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8277473547 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511428571429 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.0512506779 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 26.9230769231 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.3204027224 48.84282405 185% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.230769231 120.699889404 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.644075263715 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.5376344086 176% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.54480286738 812% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.7802197802 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.056 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363026609924 0.300154397459 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15087292669 0.103427244359 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112331050624 0.0752933317313 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.721939029764 0.497263757937 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.260638819196 0.151897553556 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176945263189 0.114077575197 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172375598598 0.0781384742642 221% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.24854047098 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750154426843 0.067059652881 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202247649814 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136705066163 0.0618886996521 221% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 60 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 18 Out of 30