Today's modern more dependent on internet based because whatever we are doing is internet based only, we can not good life without it. In all the field internet poses the very good position. For example TV channels, government offices like pass port offices, railways, telephone dept, fire service, educational sector, medical field and so on. So I agree that statement which states the internet has crucial role in our life, no one can denial it.
First of all, I want to explore some advantages of internet, for example when I was young children we used to go the railway station which is far away from my house, it takes more than hours in the traffic hour, moreover, that we do not know the availability of tickets on those days. It was very difficult make trip plan for us on those days, it was quite disturb for us. But nowadays, I can make ticket from my PC, lap top and even in mobile. It is became more accessible today there is no problem.
Secondly, Even though, if the internet more information about everything but still it maintains the customer privacy policy, for example, yes, it gives all information what I want but the same it never over rides my personal privacy, meaning my information can not access by someone they need my password to access my account and further it asks some more information apart from it,
Thirdly, this is true some time when information visible to everyone, for example terrorist about more secret information and events they may use this technology in wrong ways too, like high jacking flight, threatening the government and so on. But still nowadays technology more advance ever before. Moreover, scientist found so many solution rectify these sort of problems. so we need worry about much about this nowadays.
Finally, coin has two sides like each technology has it own advantages and disadvantages by seeing the benefits of information through internet is more important for our today's busy life style. when compare benefits of it with it abuse, benefits more when we use internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. For example TV channels, government offices like pass port offices, railways...
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Suggestion:
...f all, I want to explore some advantages of internet, for example when I was youn...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disturbed'.
Suggestion: disturbed
...plan for us on those days, it was quite disturb for us. But nowadays, I can make ticket...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...y PC, lap top and even in mobile. It is became more accessible today there is no probl...
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...my information can not access by someone they need my password to access my accou...
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...sks some more information apart from it, Thirdly, this is true some time when inf...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'many solutions'.
Suggestion: many solutions
...er before. Moreover, scientist found so many solution rectify these sort of problems. so we n...
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...cientist found so many solution rectify these sort of problems. so we need worry about muc...
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Suggestion: So
...olution rectify these sort of problems. so we need worry about much about this now...
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
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...s two sides like each technology has it own advantages and disadvantages by seeing ...
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...eing the benefits of information through internet is more important for our today...
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...portant for our todays busy life style. when compare benefits of it with it abuse, b...
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...se, benefits more when we use internet.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'third', 'thirdly', 'apart from', 'for example', 'sort of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.117346938776 0.158761421928 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0790816326531 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0841836734694 0.046263068375 182% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.094387755102 0.0685040099705 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119897959184 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.015306122449 0.0351676179071 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.55232434434 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0102040816327 0.0309702414327 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0637755102041 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127551020408 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178571428571 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2066.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 348.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9367816092 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313218390805 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270114942529 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181034482759 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114942528736 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55232434434 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 66.4239493195 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.8571428571 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 149.122963233 48.84282405 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.571428571 120.699889404 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.644075263715 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.54480286738 234% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.86863711 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.30172413793 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175788191065 0.300154397459 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0772404134418 0.103427244359 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0614844431696 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524513127171 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20713110799 0.151897553556 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559897268074 0.114077575197 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536384885196 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.211101427226 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.057034168544 0.067059652881 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108447940533 0.210909579961 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175464815902 0.0618886996521 28% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.