With the advancement in technology, people are now able to monitor what people are saying and doing. For instance, with the Global Positioning System (GPS) setting on, parents can track the position of their children to ensure their children reach home safely after school. Sometimes, people are unaware that they are being monitored. It is not surprised when you see a CCTV installed at the side of the road while walking on the street. There are pros and cons on this development which will be discussed further.
First of all, the advantage of monitoring a person using a CCTV can enhance the productivity of a company. It is common to find a CCTV in an office in every corner possible. When a worker knows he or she is being monitored by a CCTV, he or she will do the works within the time period given. The worker will perform better and he or she will not work on personal matters during working hours. The installation of CCTV helps the company to supervise the workers.
Besides, technology helps police and cops to probe the crime cases. Many people tend to install a CCTV at the front gate of their houses to prevent intruders come to their houses. It would be easier for the police to catch the burglar faster if the CCTV able to capture the face of the burglar. Aforementioned, if a CCTV is installed at the side of the road, it will record and capture the car plate number of the car which goes against the law while driving.
On the other hand, the disadvantage of the development is people feel insecure when they are unaware that they are being monitored. There was a case happened recently regarding a boutique store installed a mirror in the fitting room in which the mirror can capture the condition a girl changing clothes. The girl was not aware that she was being monitored in the fitting room until the video was uploaded in social media. This shows the technology is being abused.
Another point worth to mention is that the misuse of the technology can lead to safety problem. When a person turns on the GPS setting in his or her phone, other people can track where he or she is in. This will lead to the person being kidnapped. It is therefore advisable not to turn on the GPS setting as it will expose your location to the strangers.
In conclusion, technology which is developed to be used to monitor people has advantages and disadvantages. We shall not abuse the technology as it will lead people who are being monitored feel not secure wherever he or she is and they feel they do not have privacy.
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? 67
- "Prevention is better than cure."Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. 73
- "Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing up their children."To what extent do you agree 76
- one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 80
- The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.What are the causes of this continued rise?Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity? 72
Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233265720081 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.204868154158 0.155533422707 132% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0405679513185 0.0946595960268 43% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0283975659229 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0649087221095 0.0437548338989 148% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105476673428 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0649087221095 0.0403226058552 161% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50570078195 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344827586207 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.127789046653 0.0861772015684 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0304259634888 0.021408717616 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0223123732252 0.011925033212 187% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2549.0 1933.35771543 132% => OK
No of words: 455.0 316.048096192 144% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6021978022 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.20517956788 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298901098901 0.374742101984 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2 0.28420135186 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136263736264 0.203846283523 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0901098901099 0.137316102897 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50570078195 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.037074148 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468131868132 0.56093040696 83% => OK
Word variations: 52.3520274607 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0891783567 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9583333333 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2038978871 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.208333333 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9583333333 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.458333333333 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 38.9583333333 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.3537414966 1.69124875643 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427197982191 0.332605444948 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106952648992 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0942479453078 0.0668466124924 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551677662661 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133808862771 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174668670156 0.134430193775 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874931558148 0.0742795772207 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.369804197104 0.324371583561 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.056661886191 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284670454928 0.228012699653 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704193706346 0.058150111329 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 1.9629258517 408% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 10.4468937876 182% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9