Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many case, theh people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
The modern world is being driven by progress of technology. As a result, it has affected people's content of conversation as well as their actions without their notices. While there are some arguements that this is beneficial, i suppose there are some underlying risks.
it is favourably that development of technology benefits people lives. Firstly, it facilitates daily lives. For example, tracking people's searches for accomodation in online searching tools or social networks allows marketing services to be able to know customers' needs. they can therefore adapt to the market and as the result, they will meet up with customers' satisfaction . Secondly, technology allow a safer lives for people. For instance, in area with high crime rate, the use of security cameras ensure the safety of local residents. When a crime is committed, the records from the camera system can be used as an obvious evidences.
On the other hand, there are a number of concern. The fact that companies is capable of collecting personal information without customers accept can become highly risky. if hackers attacked database systems and stole this information, people would be put in danger of unwanted crimes such as blackmailing, online burgling. Addtionally, if their information are sold for a third-partied organisation, customers will be annoyed with unwanted advertisement.
it is seems inevitable that there will be more and more ways to monitor society in the future. However, it is our responsibility to evaluate new technology and decide whether it is safe enough for the application in real world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33201581028 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00480374695 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0467903391 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221468822917 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616944739664 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448062794342 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117045263876 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392896597998 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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