On the positive side media has remaarkable impact on the society. It has various advantages. It deliver information to the whole world by many ways like through newspapers, magazines, and internet. First of all printing media newspapers and magzines contain a lot of news related to government , day to day incidents , international news. These are available at cheap rates and every normal person can afford these. Furthermore televisions deliEver information with audio-visual effects. This type of media aware us about good policies, products with the help of advertisements. Today, crime is arising at an alarming rate. Online media aware people to keep away from crime and criminals. For example TV programs like Savdhan India, crime petrol are telecasting to help people know about the criminal activities. So, media helps people in many ways.
On the other hand, there are also some disadvantges of media which can not be underestimated. Media spread very rumours about the goverment and politicians. In addition, media shows a news by extending it. Many youngsters believe blindly on news shown in television. It leaves a bad impact on them and they go toward wrong direction.
- There are many types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important and should it be preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays more useful to a society? 73
- These days people get more information of the whole world with the help of media. What are the advantages and disadvantages of media. 73
- failure is a key to success do yo agree or disagree with the given opinion give relevant examples to clarify your stand 87
- These days people get more information of the whole world with the help of media What are the advantages and disadvantages of media 77
- These days people get more information of the whole world with the help of media What are the advantages and disadvantages of media 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...society. It has various advantages. It deliver information to the whole world by many ...
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...nd internet. First of all printing media newspapers and magzines contain a lot of...
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...tain a lot of news related to government , day to day incidents , international ne...
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...ted to government , day to day incidents , international news. These are available...
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...d every normal person can afford these. Furthermore televisions deliEver information with...
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...wn in television. It leaves a bad impact on them and they go toward wrong directi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'furthermore', 'so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.311627906977 0.247107183377 126% => OK
Verbs: 0.13023255814 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.093023255814 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0232558139535 0.0501214627716 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0325581395349 0.0437548338989 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13023255814 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0372093023256 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96262918341 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0232558139535 0.0326793684256 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0046511627907 0.00163938923432 284% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0790697674419 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0093023255814 0.021408717616 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0046511627907 0.011925033212 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1204.0 1933.35771543 62% => OK
No of words: 191.0 316.048096192 60% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30366492147 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20517956788 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34554973822 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261780104712 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204188481675 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151832460733 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96262918341 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.037074148 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685863874346 0.56093040696 122% => OK
Word variations: 75.7544359391 60.7387585426 125% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 11.9375 20.7743622355 57% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7057838434 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 127.492653851 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9375 20.7743622355 57% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38877755511 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.1155104712 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 2.575 1.69124875643 152% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43532978084 0.332605444948 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0757358312295 0.102741220458 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0532919542016 0.0668466124924 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.333968882154 0.534860350844 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.104807665905 0.148594505496 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124552419404 0.134430193775 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946276906324 0.0742795772207 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296271362265 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0638462369009 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329260283661 0.228012699653 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106638961918 0.058150111329 183% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 50.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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