The graph below shows the amount spent on apparel on the internet in USA and japan between 1999 and 2003.
The line graph shows the online amount spent on apparel In USA and Japan During the time period of 1999 to 2003.
According to the given graph in 1999 USA spend $5 million and $10 million spend by japan on cloths through internet. Afterthat the sale of USA goes double to $10 million and japan had rose by $3 million in 2001. During 2002 Japan reacched the bottom of of only $7 million and USA falls to $8 millionn. The sales rapidly goes to $20 million in 2002 of both countries. In 2003 only USA reached at peak of $22 million and Japan remain same in apparel sales.
Overall it is clear that apparel sales of Japan and USA shows a big increase from begining to last .
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Sentence: In 2003 only USA reached at peak of 22 million and Japan remain same in apparel sales.
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Sentence: During 2002 Japan reacched the bottom of of only 7 million and USA falls to 8 millionn.
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Sentence: Overall it is clear that apparel sales of Japan and USA shows a big increase from begining to last .
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