The article is talking about the reasons for the Little Ice Age, and it suggests that the disrupting of ocean currents, volcanic eruption and decreasing of human population are the main reasons; however, the professor believes that those explanations are not the real causes. The discussions are provided in following passages.
First, the cold fresh water will not effect the whole climate of the earth. While those melted glaciers sent a large amount of cold water into the Gulf Stream, the temperature drops only happened in Europe and America. It had limited disruption on the Earth’s climate and cannot explain the Little Ice Age happened in South Africa and New Zealand. The professor states that this reason is not the cause of the Little Ice Age.
Furthermore, the article states that the volcanic eruption could have caused the Little Ice Age; on the contrary, the professor mentions that the volcanic eruption would also trigger the striking visual effect, for example, brown sown and colorful sunset, but there was few record about it. Thus, the volcanic eruptions had released too little amount of dust to have the impact on the Earth’s climate.
Finally, the article comments that the decreases in human population will lower the content of carbon dioxide at the same time; in contrast, the professor suggests that the decreases in population happened just in a short period and the population recovered quickly. To be more specific, the reduction of the greenhouse gas was not so obvious that to cause the Little Ice Age. The absorption could not have such a great impact on the Earth’s climate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... First, the cold fresh water will not effect the whole climate of the earth. While t...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun record seems to be countable; consider using: 'few records'.
Suggestion: few records
...sown and colorful sunset, but there was few record about it. Thus, the volcanic eruptions ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in contrast', 'talking about', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.300675675676 0.261695866417 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.114864864865 0.158904122519 72% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0945945945946 0.0723426182421 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0574324324324 0.0435111971325 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0101351351351 0.0277247811725 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114864864865 0.128828473217 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0236486486486 0.0370669169778 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50134556784 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0101351351351 0.0208969081088 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.155405405405 0.128158765124 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0202702702703 0.0158828679856 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1623.0 1645.83664459 99% => OK
No of words: 267.0 271.125827815 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07865168539 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38202247191 0.374372842146 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288389513109 0.287516216867 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224719101124 0.187439937562 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116104868914 0.113142543107 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50134556784 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524344569288 0.539623497131 97% => OK
Word variations: 51.0962627992 53.8517498576 95% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2727272727 21.7502111507 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.2947406769 49.3711431718 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.545454545 132.220823453 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 21.7502111507 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 0.878197800319 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 53.1116785836 50.5018328374 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.40740740741 1.90840788429 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.696942078888 0.549887131256 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.166138157287 0.142949733639 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0698080471198 0.0787303798458 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.697420232911 0.631733273073 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144970965184 0.139662658121 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.400595013732 0.266732575781 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10083109133 0.103435571967 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.560689842309 0.414875509568 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0119918597275 0.0530846634433 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.566557207983 0.40443939384 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367574971228 0.0528353158467 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.49668874172 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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