Someone states that young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. In my opinion, while young people spend lots of time for their own habits, they still give their time to help their communities. Due to the reasons such as the connection with the communities, the sense of caring the place they born, and motivation of making the communities better.
First, young people who grow up in the communities will have a deep connection with people, sites, and lifestyle in the communities. Since they have such connection, young people will have tendency to help their communities. For example, if a small town were stroke by typhoon or other reasons, young people in the community will try their best to help the people in the town to recover as fast as possible. Because they have strong memory with everything in the town such as their elementary school or the play ground, they will work hard to help the community of their own.
Second, while young people may study or work outside the communities, they still care about the hometown. What they can do for their hometown is to help their communities when it needs some assistance. For example, their communities may far away from the city center, young people will spend their time to help the communities, such as teaching students in their communities.
Finally, in order to make the communities better, giving their time to help the communities is a good way. The communities may have some problem to be solved, and young people have creativity to solve the problems in their communities.
In sum, young people who have been labeled that they are not willing to help their communities. In fact, they have the passion with the place they born and they use their way to help their communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...ies, the sense of caring the place they born, and motivation of making the communiti...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...mmunities. For example, if a small town were stroke by typhoon or other reasons, you...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'stroked'.
Suggestion: stroked
...ties. For example, if a small town were stroke by typhoon or other reasons, young peop...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238938053097 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.150442477876 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0766961651917 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353982300885 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0914454277286 0.0685040099705 133% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11209439528 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0265486725664 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58095844989 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0442477876106 0.0309702414327 143% => OK
Particles: 0.00294985250737 0.00188951952338 156% => OK
Determiners: 0.0855457227139 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0265486725664 0.0209618222197 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117994100295 0.0139019557991 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1797.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 304.0 408.028673835 75% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91118421053 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.269736842105 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200657894737 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138157894737 0.174417080927 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101973684211 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58095844989 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4375 0.524397521467 83% => OK
Word variations: 42.3312089254 59.2087087015 71% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7142857143 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2011116162 48.84282405 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.357142857 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.5533526081 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 41.780075188 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.36170212766 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347590186906 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.216015513886 0.103427244359 209% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693049530833 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.670017658009 0.497263757937 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115730460325 0.151897553556 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192550847655 0.114077575197 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714017858248 0.0781384742642 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.501904365728 0.336927656856 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0266915608892 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263638217545 0.210909579961 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060817111551 0.0618886996521 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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