Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technologyis creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The neighborhood we live in is a very important part of our lives. It is where we spend most of our time and many years of our life. If a movie theater were going to be built in my neighborhood, some residents I’m sure would believe that it is a great idea; others would disagree. In my view, a movie theater would be a positive addition for two important reasons.
The main reason is that the addition will generate jobs. In order to build the theater, construction workers will be needed, architects, engineers, and many other people. This means that many people will have the opportunity to work. For example, in Knee city, my hometown, a new theater was built on our busiest street, Main Street. Before the theater was built, there was just open land. As the theater was being constructed, there were advertisements in the paper asking for construction workers. Many people applied and a few were able to work for the company. After its construction, the ads didn’t stop since they started looking for dozens of employees to run the theater. As you can see, these people wouldn’t have had the opportunity to work if it weren’t for the addition of the movie theater.
Another reason is that a new movie theater will add tax revenue for the city. Many people who might have stayed home to relax may decide to go to the theater instead. The money they spend at the theater is taxed. These tax dollars are new to the city and will add more tax revenue to help the city improve itself. For instance, after the theater in my hometown was built, it became very popular. My friends and I spent a lot more time in the area. Normally, we would go to a theater in a city about 15 miles away. After a year or two, we began to notice that our city was spending more money on our schools and streets. Normally, it would work on the streets, fixing potholes, every few years. Now, whenever there was a pothole, the city would fix it within a month. Our local newspaper said this was a result of the added tax revenue new businesses like the movie theater were adding. This experience taught me that new businesses are very beneficial for cities.
In sum, though some may oppose the plan, a new theater would be a great addition to my hometown or any other city. Not only will the addition generate jobs for residents but also the added tax revenue could help the city provide more for its residents. Every city should work to introduce businesses such as movie theaters into their community.
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- TPO-30 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use spec 70
- TPO 19- Independent Task 70
- TPO 31- Integrated Task 76
- TPO-29 - Integrated Writing Task Large numbers of dinosaur fossils have been discovered in deposits on Alaska's North Slope, a region that today experiences an extremely cold,arctic climate. One hundred million years ago, when those dinosaurs were alive, 80
- TPO 30- Integrated Task 70
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246520874751 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.165009940358 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0675944333996 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0278330019881 0.046263068375 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0636182902584 0.0685040099705 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10337972167 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0357852882704 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43382056085 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298210735586 0.0309702414327 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115308151093 0.0887237588012 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.037773359841 0.0209618222197 180% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00596421471173 0.0139019557991 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2494.0 2387.08602151 104% => OK
No of words: 449.0 408.028673835 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55456570156 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.269487750557 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.209354120267 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13140311804 0.174417080927 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0734966592428 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43382056085 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465478841871 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.7659236181 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0357142857 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0929051636 48.84282405 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0714285714 120.699889404 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0357142857 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.392857142857 0.644075263715 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 36.9711263124 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.50387596899 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135040852913 0.300154397459 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109456135989 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0750317812685 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.446560044966 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109174196393 0.151897553556 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528477234381 0.114077575197 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298783812878 0.0781384742642 38% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.429611593826 0.336927656856 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129840030444 0.067059652881 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953409833696 0.210909579961 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284670433333 0.0618886996521 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.91756272401 285% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 13.0 2.75985663082 471% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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