Not surprisingly, children's upbringing is set to play a pivotal role in human society. It has been argued that children have been affected more by their children. Meanwhile, some are of the opinion that their peers have critical role in their characteristic. While I donot tend to refute the teachers' impression, I support the latter view based on the following concerns.
Admittedly, amity is regarded as a critical part of every one's daily life. In fact, since young population, nowadays, have involved more in group activity or social gathering, they have to spend a large portion of time for not only daily school assignments but also in order to socializing with them. By being exposure long time to different idea and belief, children have gradually been influenced by their friends' thought. Furthermore, peers have a deep understanding from each other's situation. Conspicuously, when youngsters are in the same age, they have faced with the same problems such as entrance to the military service or seeking for a decent career. Hence, their mutual relationships might indicate that the solutions offered by friends seem more practical and logical compared to anyone else in the world. As a result, dawdling more time with friends and have lots of things in common with them cause them to play a main role in each other's traits.
On the other side, the significance of instructors should not be overlooked. As people now are living in a society which juvenile delinquency, teen pregnancy and suicide are becoming the main social problems, current learning framework change its pervious material and have included both academic subjects and ethical issues. Therefore, teachers are liable to teach moral topics and help students to distinguish between acceptable and wrong behaviors. In fact, since children are more flexible to learn moral materials in school time, strong relationship with students help them for being a qualified worker and successful individuals.
From what have been discussed, the impact of friends can outweigh the instructor's role. As it was stated, deep and long-run friendship has made peers as one of the most effective characters in everyone's life. However, didactics environment and teachers can instill fundamental codes of moral in students' mindsets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...istic. While I donot tend to refute the teachers impression, I support the latter view b...
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Line 3, column 481, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ers have a deep understanding from each others situation. Conspicuously, when youngste...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'instructors'' or 'instructor's'?
Suggestion: instructors'; instructor's
... the impact of friends can outweigh the instructors role. As it was stated, deep and long-r...
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Line 7, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al codes of moral in students mindsets.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'while', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248768472906 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.162561576355 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12315270936 0.0866891130778 142% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467980295567 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0394088669951 0.0685040099705 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125615763547 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0689655172414 0.0351676179071 196% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.84570899311 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0270935960591 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0714285714286 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00985221674877 0.0209618222197 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00738916256158 0.0139019557991 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2298.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 365.0 408.028673835 89% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29589041096 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375342465753 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.306849315068 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241095890411 0.174417080927 138% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142465753425 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84570899311 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591780821918 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 69.2586844111 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2777777778 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4141183929 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.644075263715 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 50.9627092846 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.78217821782 1.45489161554 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249786150362 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0682583945378 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0599815162177 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458427875182 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132928124564 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919425601551 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599271470147 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314859869821 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0513713625427 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165736157088 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487278226846 0.0618886996521 79% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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