Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. I diasagree wirh author staement that scands canno't solve our problems because majority of scandals are unwnanted to te public which will divert actual problrms rather than solving. Due to scandals majority of problems are not exposed and un treated to solve by highliting of absurd scandals.
Firstly, scandals are
The issue state's that scandals which will focus our attention on problems in ways no reformer ever could. I disagree with author statement that scandals cannot solve our problems because majority of scandals are unwanted to the public which will divert actual problems rather than solving. Due to scandals majority of problems are not exposed and untreated to solve by highlighting of absurd scandals.
Firstly, scandals cannot solve our problems as a speaker or reformer. Majority of scandals diverse the actual problem of people by exposing irrelevant scandals, which will over hyped by media. Such scandals leads ti misconception of existing suffer of problems. For example, recently a scandal which involves the 3G spectrum which doesn't matter to majority of people in India. 3G scandal given too much hype by national protesters to cover the existing problems and continued so many moths. This scandal benefits for only the politician but not majority of people. From this we can say that scandals will misuses the true problems.
Moreover, the scandals are used by media for their trp ratings and leave the rest problems. So, media, politicians are using scandals for their personal benefits which cannot be encouraged. Consider recent scandal such as, a politician in a state involved in sexual relation with others.This scandal doesn't matter for people because they bother for their problems rather than considering such useless hyped scandal. In this scandal, the media or other protesters can pay attention to solve majority of the problems which left as unsolved which will sooth the sufferer of people.
Some scandals may be useful to the people which involves in public point of view. Public funds scandal or constituency development budget scandal will definitely should involved by every one to raise against those cheaters. All those protesters should pay attention to solve the such scandals, will benevolent to public and their problems can be solved.
Therefore, scandals which are irrelevant and unnecessary hyped are not useful for people to solve their problems. Scandal which are most helpful can be treated to the development of solutions to problems. Based up on the above reasons I disagree with authors assumption.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266666666667 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0794871794872 0.0880659088768 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0487179487179 0.0497285424764 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0307692307692 0.0444667217837 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128205128205 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0487179487179 0.0406280797675 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61550262639 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0025641025641 0.0016655270985 154% => OK
Determiners: 0.0717948717949 0.0997080785238 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0461538461538 0.0249443105267 185% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0282051282051 0.0148568991511 190% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2257.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 357.0 452.878318584 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32212885154 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.434173669468 0.366273622748 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327731092437 0.280924506359 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257703081232 0.200843997647 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109243697479 0.132149295362 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61550262639 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 48.7129868267 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.85 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.718668937 59.4972553346 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.85 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.85 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.674092028746 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.6231092437 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.9010989011 1.64882698954 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365090278569 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.136377359771 0.123202303941 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0701015798763 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521892143945 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127677517557 0.149214159877 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151509589841 0.161403998019 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108151404229 0.0892212321368 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.417042469765 0.385218514788 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.097891214289 0.0692045440612 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260512452766 0.275328986314 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13919771369 0.0653680567796 213% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.4325221239 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 20.0 5.30420353982 377% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 7.22455752212 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 19.0 3.66592920354 518% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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