The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
The issue states best for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, or other fields is by instilling in them cooperation but not competition is vague assumption. The cooperation leads to increase in mutual existence by without questioning against indictment. Cooperation increases self valued things and voice against wrong things is weaken by increasing cooperation without competition.
In rapid growing situation, competition is increasing day by day. Due to competition heavy potential and caliber things or terms of a person or a industry, government is exposed much than what they expect, Competition leads to increase caliber of doing things effectively and much more service than others. For example, in a school when there is no competition in a class, then the students don't use full length capacity to achieve or to stood as a class first percentile or his best outcome in cooperative way. So, competition is essential not only in school but in industries, government for effective working.
Cooperation encourages to do their own valued things or self cooperative things and even corruption also increases in a great way. When their is no competition then automatically the voice which expects to raise against anti social activities will be undermine. Consider, the two major political parties are agreed for mutual cooperation by instilling cooperation then their is subtle difference for ruling government and opposition. Such in cooperative manner ruling government may increase to devalued things and protest against such things will be weaken with cooperation.
Moreover, competition is necessary term in current trends because competition will deliberately increases the effectiveness and reach their motives Let us consider a super market situation for this assumption. When all the super market's are mutually cooperative then their prices of selling goods are increased. The people will have no automate to use other markets. So it leads to curse for people. So competition must exist.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260997067449 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.181818181818 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0879765395894 0.0880659088768 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.058651026393 0.0497285424764 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0381231671554 0.0444667217837 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117302052786 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.049853372434 0.0406280797675 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0818350428 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.030933414821 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.058651026393 0.0997080785238 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175953079179 0.0249443105267 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0146627565982 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2041.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 315.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.47936507937 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.428571428571 0.366273622748 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.32380952381 0.280924506359 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.24126984127 0.200843997647 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.203174603175 0.132149295362 154% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0818350428 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 55.9721648794 55.4138127331 101% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6875 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3512918371 59.4972553346 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5625 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.674092028746 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.068452381 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.53684210526 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.524375375432 0.391690518653 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.119766751915 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0593671824537 0.077325440228 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500273091916 0.547984918172 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116298486696 0.149214159877 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183841632161 0.161403998019 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157710671521 0.0892212321368 177% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303865506356 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0487883058517 0.0692045440612 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348486333536 0.275328986314 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137867797968 0.0653680567796 211% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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