Yes, I agree with statement which sates after 20 years we can see only few cars on the road or may be car available in museum as antiquity materials. This may happen for following two main important reasons either due to the technological advancement in industrial area or lack of fossil fuel in future. Whatever reason it may be there will be very few cars only we can be seen later life.
First of all, now a days technologies are so advanced in each every field. For example one of the leading car manufacturing company in US already introduced the alternative fuel to replace the fossil fuel for generating the energy. Even the succeed in the experimental trial which they done in California state two years before. And they using the hydrogen as fuel that produces lots of energy which we can use it fly the car and even we can use it as flying parachute in future.
Secondly, using of this advanced technology, we need not to depend on fossil fuel. Further more it reduced the pollution surrounding the environment. Today, people are more depend on the aircraft ever before, for example when i was it I used to capital city by bus which take me some where around six hours but now a days often I using the flight to fly to my capital city. Like that even 30% if started using the flight for travelling then automatically, the number cars on the will be reduced dramatically.
Thirdly, due to traffic on road more people car pooling, using public bus and metro train that will reduce the number of cars on the road, New York is the classical example for this events, most of the people not using their own because of traffic jam and uncertainty of arrival time,all it push them use alternative transportation. In facet it good ecology.
Finally, now a days fossil fuel are reduced in the middle east which is primary countries of oil production even in polar region like Alaska also have every less oil resources. So these events are having major impact on manufacturing company so that may causes very less cars on road.
To sum up, whatever reason it might me whether because advancement in technology or lack oil production or alternative solution that hundred percent reduce the cars on the road in future there is no doubt in that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255220417633 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.136890951276 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0742459396752 0.0866891130778 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0719257540603 0.046263068375 155% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0533642691415 0.0685040099705 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127610208817 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.046403712297 0.0351676179071 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61632768791 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0185614849188 0.0309702414327 60% => OK
Particles: 0.00232018561485 0.00188951952338 123% => OK
Determiners: 0.092807424594 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0278422273782 0.0209618222197 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0255220417633 0.0139019557991 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2278.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 399.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70927318296 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290726817043 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205513784461 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125313283208 0.174417080927 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0927318295739 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61632768791 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.5986915121 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9375 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6185268801 48.84282405 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.375 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.54480286738 433% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.4888784461 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.63716814159 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327146444508 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0873840017785 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0618451452164 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.583379431717 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209342082146 0.151897553556 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128431391875 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814636828854 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27132118672 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0814321061633 0.067059652881 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203575110779 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696433783716 0.0618886996521 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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