Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
As the saying goes, “Time makes heroes”, through out the human history, there has been many times a leader is chosen and made to play the role when there is a demand for a great figure. Thus, I agree with the statement above to some extent. However, in my view, there are also other critical factors that create and make great leaders as discussed below.
Admittedly, it is difficult to deny that leaders emerged when there is a need from public. Especially when there was a radical change in a country, such as change of the main controller of a country, there always have been leaders. For ex...
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
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arguments: OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 524 350
No. of Characters: 2438 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.784 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.653 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.387 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 169 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.818 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.055 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ng goes, 'Time makes heroes', through out the human history, there has been many ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...ve to some extent. However, in my view, there are also other critical factors that create and make g...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223333333333 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.15 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816666666667 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616666666667 0.0497285424764 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.04 0.0444667217837 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121666666667 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.04 0.0406280797675 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64257993013 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0166666666667 0.030933414821 54% => OK
Particles: 0.00166666666667 0.0016655270985 100% => OK
Determiners: 0.106666666667 0.0997080785238 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015 0.0249443105267 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183333333333 0.0148568991511 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3073.0 2732.02544248 112% => OK
No of words: 524.0 452.878318584 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86450381679 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7844588288 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333969465649 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24427480916 0.280924506359 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152671755725 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0916030534351 0.132149295362 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64257993013 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 219.290929204 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473282442748 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 55.4822716423 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9523809524 23.380412469 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1682952052 59.4972553346 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 141.124799967 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9523809524 23.380412469 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.674092028746 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 49.3798618684 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.5298013245 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374745566458 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108600185736 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.057274735447 0.077325440228 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53412648622 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144707384853 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163752494638 0.161403998019 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077641248522 0.0892212321368 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.444058797957 0.385218514788 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0866390524283 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263956342874 0.275328986314 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055994048982 0.0653680567796 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.