In the given set of materials, the main topic has centered on the reasons resulted in the little Ice Age. While the author has focused on the three main proposed justifications, the speaker in the follow-up material cast doubt on those points in a number of ways.
The first reason mentioned in the article is that warm weather caused the melted glaciers to disrupt the Gulf Stream and probably it was responsible for the Ice Age. However, this was questioned by the lecturer as he argued this event could not have such an influence to change the remote area's weather in southern hemisphere.
Moreover, according to the essay, since a volcanic eruption might beget dark cloud, acted as a barrier to the sunlight, the temperature declined and as a result, Ice Age happened. Nevertheless, the speaker has stated such amount of the dark cloud, certainly might have other visual evidence like gray snow. Conversely, there was not any report for an unusual phenomena during this period.
Last but not least, the writer has asserted that decline in human population and the aggressive growth of trees caused more dioxide carbon usage in photosynthesis process. Therefore, the weather had become cool. On the other hand, according to the orator, this cycle had been required more time, however, little Ice Age occurred quickly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'phenomenon'?
Suggestion: phenomenon
...there was not any report for an unusual phenomena during this period. Last but not lea...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246963562753 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.158904122519 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113360323887 0.0723426182421 157% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0485829959514 0.0435111971325 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0080971659919 0.0277247811725 29% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.113360323887 0.128828473217 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0566801619433 0.0370669169778 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60940764628 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0202429149798 0.0208969081088 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.14979757085 0.128158765124 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121457489879 0.0158828679856 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1328.0 1645.83664459 81% => OK
No of words: 220.0 271.125827815 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03636363636 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.04852973271 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.377272727273 0.374372842146 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259090909091 0.287516216867 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186363636364 0.187439937562 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1 0.113142543107 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60940764628 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.539623497131 116% => OK
Word variations: 65.0370054856 53.8517498576 121% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0529801325 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7293809925 49.3711431718 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 132.220823453 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.878197800319 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 47.9090909091 50.5018328374 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.98076923077 1.90840788429 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.62544534585 0.549887131256 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132373795137 0.142949733639 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101237359117 0.0787303798458 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.648975802593 0.631733273073 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180236350299 0.139662658121 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.294129708771 0.266732575781 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12380573305 0.103435571967 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349911778941 0.414875509568 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0553611671366 0.0530846634433 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.440239610427 0.40443939384 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479559222222 0.0528353158467 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.