Nowadays, traveling is to play a critical role in everyone's life than ever before. Since there is a growing appetite for taking trip, the discussion has centered on whether traveling in home country can be beneficial or not. While I donot tend to refute such a view, I believe it can not be generalized to all cases based on the following reasons.
One of the main feature of establishing foreign countries as a destination is that it has paved the way for exploring novelty. To begin with, it has been recognized as an effective way for learning another language. In fact, traveling to different places allows its travelers to get familiar with foreign language. In addition, it has opened up the door for socializing and communicating with new people. As an example, any oversees' tourist has acknowledged that being in a country is the best way for having perception about their specific customs and languages. Therefore, taking trip to abroad countries not only can be accompanied with lots of pleasure but also it is a great chance to be in a situation for examination other's language and culture.
Another justification for traveling abroad is its variety. As a matter of fact, traveling to remote places serves different facilities like sightseeing exotic landscapes and experience new climate. Since most small countries have located in specific distance from equator, their weather and as a result, their vegetation are as the same in different part of these countries. Hence, outside trip provides new opportunity for all walks of life.
Although having traveled to different countries have myriad positive points, some of advantages of interior excursions should not be overlooked. Firstly, some elderly or people with the lack of an ability for adaptation with new environment might be encountered with strange language, discordant culture or disorder in their routine dietary. However, this related problem spontaneously solved in home-land mobility. Furthermore, traveling inside the country is regarded as a fortune to flourish local economic boom.
From what have been discussed, the advantages of having trip to a foreign country outweigh it demerits. As it was mentioned, there has been a wide range of opportunities in traveling abroad such as experience novel language, culture, landscape or weather condition. However, in-country trip can help local economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the advantages') or simply say ''some advantages''.
Suggestion: some of the advantages; some advantages
... countries have myriad positive points, some of advantages of interior excursions should not be ov...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228028503563 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.190023752969 0.158761421928 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0997624703088 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0356294536817 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0356294536817 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149643705463 0.118717715034 126% => OK
Participles: 0.0926365795724 0.0351676179071 263% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.97575268531 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285035629454 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00237529691211 0.00188951952338 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0807600950119 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142517814727 0.0209618222197 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00237529691211 0.0139019557991 17% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2387.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 379.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2981530343 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.419525065963 0.338922669872 124% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.353562005277 0.251872472559 140% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.271767810026 0.174417080927 156% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.182058047493 0.112833075102 161% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97575268531 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562005277045 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 64.1024682093 59.2087087015 108% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.95 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7958818112 48.84282405 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.35 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.644075263715 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 54.3062005277 45.7405998639 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.8 1.45489161554 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276636331531 0.300154397459 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0804571574569 0.103427244359 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0492197592562 0.0752933317313 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473577455823 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113596166545 0.151897553556 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099142587643 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497329568239 0.0781384742642 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267911531169 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0427283040894 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178073701453 0.210909579961 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188634527759 0.0618886996521 30% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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