The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005,

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The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005,

Submitted by Zarak 99 on Tue, 08/09/2016 - 12:37

This chart illustrates the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers of men and women for 8 types of purposes (courses, visiting town, Bank, running errands, visiting friends, recreation, work and shopping) in 2005.

Overall, the largest number of car trips made by men for the purpose of work which is about 52% and 39% by females, while there is least number of trips to bank by men which is about 5% and by females to visiting towns which is about 2%

In case of males, the car trips made for the purpose of work is about 52%, and about 11% for recreation, about 10% for shopping and about 9% to visit different towns.

In case of females, the largest number of trips were made for the purpose of work which is about 39%, with 18% for shopping, 11% for course purpose and 10% for running errands.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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This chart illustrates the estimated per...
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...creation, work and shopping in 2005. Overall, the largest number of car trips...
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... to visiting towns which is about 2% In case of males, the car trips made for...
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...d about 9% to visit different towns. In case of females, the largest number o...
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...purpose and 10% for running errands.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.344632768362 0.268076937826 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.101694915254 0.116061578633 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0282485875706 0.0759168565197 37% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0112994350282 0.0366838410393 31% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.203389830508 0.155750635184 131% => OK
Participles: 0.0508474576271 0.0379272487307 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.25161252176 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.0210936926555 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.045197740113 0.0948980150116 48% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225988700565 0.00967000014798 234% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 850.0 1161.00487805 73% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.9 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74324324324 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73763899035 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.243243243243 0.337110787985 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202702702703 0.247514529752 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135135135135 0.171178102325 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0472972972973 0.112407865282 42% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.25161252176 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452702702703 0.546246751206 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 33.9471200381 49.3433353143 69% => OK
How many sentences: 3.0 8.93414634146 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 49.3333333333 23.0094962315 214% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7081823027 42.9750493124 227% => OK
Chars per sentence: 283.333333333 135.714022679 209% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 23.0094962315 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 69.6036036036 47.7609492067 146% => OK
Elegance: 5.3 2.94281807926 180% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318283260165 0.418131533498 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.47064718615 0.181151798455 260% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.130303681232 0.0850326197045 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.54384052431e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26395554185 0.228904883108 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097597559643 0.108899403657 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.448611181192 0.367819155151 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128194530089 0.0812612215331 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237510842535 0.316326947829 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094362844615 0.0921553760075 102% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
This chart illustrates the estimated per...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...creation, work and shopping in 2005. Overall, the largest number of car trips...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the least'.
Suggestion: is the least
...out 52% and 39% by females, while there is least number of trips to bank by men which is...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to visiting towns which is about 2% In case of males, the car trips made for...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d about 9% to visit different towns. In case of females, the largest number o...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...purpose and 10% for running errands.
^^^^^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.344632768362 0.268076937826 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.101694915254 0.116061578633 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0282485875706 0.0759168565197 37% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0112994350282 0.0366838410393 31% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.203389830508 0.155750635184 131% => OK
Participles: 0.0508474576271 0.0379272487307 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.25161252176 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0169491525424 0.0210936926555 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.045197740113 0.0948980150116 48% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0225988700565 0.00967000014798 234% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 850.0 1161.00487805 73% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.9 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74324324324 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73763899035 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.243243243243 0.337110787985 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202702702703 0.247514529752 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135135135135 0.171178102325 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0472972972973 0.112407865282 42% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.25161252176 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452702702703 0.546246751206 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 33.9471200381 49.3433353143 69% => OK
How many sentences: 3.0 8.93414634146 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 49.3333333333 23.0094962315 214% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 97.7081823027 42.9750493124 227% => OK
Chars per sentence: 283.333333333 135.714022679 209% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 23.0094962315 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 69.6036036036 47.7609492067 146% => OK
Elegance: 5.3 2.94281807926 180% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318283260165 0.418131533498 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.47064718615 0.181151798455 260% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.130303681232 0.0850326197045 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.706616315825 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.54384052431e-16 0.157042692854 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26395554185 0.228904883108 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097597559643 0.108899403657 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.448611181192 0.367819155151 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128194530089 0.0812612215331 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237510842535 0.316326947829 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094362844615 0.0921553760075 102% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 7.1512195122 42% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.