Young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past
Modern society is becoming more different than before, because of its development of technology, media, or transportation system. Hence, the young people in our generation can enjoy a huge number of resources than before. And consequently, young people nowadays, are becoming more independent than before on their parents.
To begin with, young people depend less on their parents in the way to obtain information or knowledge. With the development of Internet and the diffusion of computer, young people can achieve a host of information about their countries culture, country tradition, which in the past, are always told by their parents, one generation to another generation. And young people do not need to always ask their parent about many questions, such as why the sky is blue, why bears have to sleep in the winter, why birds can fly. This case is not rare, and I believe a number of people would ask the same question to their parents when they are young. But now they can find these answers by themselves via Internet.
Also, due to the influence of the considerable amount of knowledge or information attained from the outside world, young people in the modern society become mature earlier than ones in the past.
Young people grow fast in their thoughts and hence become more independent. They gradually form the idea of independent thinking and unwilling to always rely on their parents to solve problems. They think they are equal to adults even if they are still under 18 years old. Maybe this explains why so many young people nowadays, try to share their opinion on the family decisions, and sometimes even get angry if their ideas are ignored by their parents. Because they are endeavoring to play the same role as their parents do.
Last but not least, the cases that some young people achieve economic independence are frequently broadcasted in the media, which indicates that in some extent, young people can survive on their own rather than on their parents. And with the development of technology, selling produces online or finding a part-time job online is no more a problem to them.
In conclusion, the attempt that young people try to think like their parents, live like their parents, demonstrate that the young depend less on their parents in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...dern society is becoming more different than before, because of its development of t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235981308411 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.121495327103 0.158761421928 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0911214953271 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0677570093458 0.046263068375 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0677570093458 0.0685040099705 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133177570093 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0210280373832 0.0351676179071 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5913015552 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327102803738 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0794392523364 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140186915888 0.0209618222197 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0163551401869 0.0139019557991 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2298.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.984375 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3359375 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234375 0.251872472559 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158854166667 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114583333333 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5913015552 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494791666667 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.2456904544 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5882352941 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6524090334 48.84282405 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.176470588 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 46.0257352941 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.51818181818 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510520242957 0.300154397459 170% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116962601298 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0626220370362 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.604196020782 0.497263757937 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192747524015 0.151897553556 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214725391883 0.114077575197 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134910505124 0.0781384742642 173% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298408048273 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0755834966002 0.067059652881 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344095084333 0.210909579961 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721612843432 0.0618886996521 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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