Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Some people believe that advantages of flexible laws are more than that of fixed laws. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account of the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that flexible law can save time. As we all know, the legislation law process is cumbersome and time-consuming. In the today’s fast change world, we have faced many situations which they are not written in the law. Moreover, a politician may spend several months to giving experts’ comments for imposing a law. In this way, Flexible law allows us to use them in similar conditions.
A further point we must consider is that most laws are suitable for certain generation and desirable, while over time can change the scenario. I think that a small example can give some light to this topic. Ten years ago in Singapore, the government imposed a law that women did not have a right to vote. Moreover, they had to use a special clothes, which is called Hijab, for going to out. At that time, people agreed with this rule, because the country comprised of a great number of religious people. However, the next generation has fewer religious beliefs and may consider this law is sex discrimination, or violation their freedom. In this way, a law can be fully functional and makes life convenient, if it can adapt with various conditions.
Apart from point I made above, under some circumstance, flexible laws can better establish the justice. Indeed, fixed laws lead to the judge condemns some culprits with the same punishment, while they do a similar crime in different situations. For instance, one who committed murder because of personal aim, like acquiring victim’s wealthy, should be punished like another man who killed because he wanted to protect of his family. So, the biggest advantage of the flexible law lies in the fact that promotes justice in the society.
All above evidence supports this undeniable fact that adaptable laws can save time, and also increase people’s satisfaction, expand the justice among people. Admittedly, as an English proverbs goes “a coin has two sides”; therefore, under some circumstances flexible laws have negative consequences. Nevertheless, its profits outweigh dangerous.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232967032967 0.25644967241 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.149450549451 0.15541462614 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101098901099 0.0836205057962 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0395604395604 0.0520304965353 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0373626373626 0.0272364105082 137% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112087912088 0.125424944231 89% => OK
Participles: 0.021978021978 0.0416121511921 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85731915841 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0175824175824 0.026700313972 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105494505495 0.113004496875 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0241758241758 0.0255425247493 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010989010989 0.0127820249294 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2379.0 2731.13054187 87% => OK
No of words: 381.0 446.07635468 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24409448819 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356955380577 0.378187486979 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296587926509 0.287650121315 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212598425197 0.208842608468 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128608923885 0.135150697306 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85731915841 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 207.018472906 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601049868766 0.469332199767 128% => OK
Word variations: 72.3049576793 52.1807786196 139% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.039408867 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5652173913 23.2022227129 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1352681484 57.7814097925 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.434782609 141.986410481 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5652173913 23.2022227129 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.724660767414 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.58251231527 167% => OK
Readability: 46.2240100422 51.9672348444 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.6213592233 1.8405768891 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198159698231 0.441005458295 45% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.060152079954 0.135418324435 44% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0527364487199 0.0829849096947 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.440531442216 0.58762219726 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0998715332596 0.147661913831 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616067459035 0.193483328276 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453505284334 0.0970749176394 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243077706277 0.42659136922 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104351410189 0.0774707102158 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12102967532 0.312017818177 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307913193526 0.0698173142475 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.33743842365 132% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.82512315271 145% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 6.46551724138 139% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 14.657635468 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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