Some people prefer to work for themselves our own a business. Other prefer to work for an employer. Which one do you prefer?
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have been putting all of their efforts so as to find a decent job guaranteeing their future life; hence, taking the available alternatives into account would be almost a rational task. Some people are inclined toward the opinion that they should run their own business whereas others, on the other hand, take a radically different point of view and allege that they should work for others. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, to the extent my personal perspective is concerned, people should try to run their self-employed and work for themselves. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that if people run a business for themselves, they will feel more comfort by their career. Scientifically speaking, if people work for other employer, they need to be respectful toward their decisions and desires. In fact, employers legislate strict rules for their employees and not only should workers be respectful but also should bend over backwards to satisfy all the functions. Delving further into the issue reveal that self-employed will provide fertile ground for people to feel more freedom. Arguably, not until people work for themselves can they make a sound decision in their career. In other word, employers impose a sanction and do not allow other people progress in their everyday life. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by recent social research conducted in our country show that vast majorities of people who run a business for themselves experienced more comfortable life rather than other who do not. Indeed, they have more chances to make their ideas into reality.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that people will be independent and learn how to be responsible for their job. Broadly speaking, if employees do something wrong during their working hour or face trials and tribulations, they would learn how to handle problems and find an exact solution. To put it in other word, working for others will prevent people to be a self-sufficient person and not only will not they experience life for themselves but also will deprive from earning higher income. However, what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, working for others will provide an opportunity for people to gain as much as enough experiences. In fact, employers can motivates people in order to make a living through hard work. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, a plethora of people work in order to meet their needs. Having said that some people prefer to run their own business while other prefer to work for others. Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that advantages of self-employed out weight the disadvantages and provide an opportunity for people to explore life for themselves and take the responsibility of their works. I highly suggest that people should make an effort in other or run their business and be successful in their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ness and be successful in their future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'as to', 'broadly speaking', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210896309315 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.17223198594 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0861159929701 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650263620387 0.046263068375 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0702987697715 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124780316344 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0386643233743 0.0351676179071 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86411891319 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0386643233743 0.0309702414327 125% => OK
Particles: 0.00351493848858 0.00188951952338 186% => OK
Determiners: 0.0632688927944 0.0887237588012 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0333919156415 0.0209618222197 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105448154657 0.0139019557991 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3201.0 2387.08602151 134% => OK
No of words: 519.0 408.028673835 127% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1676300578 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383429672447 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265895953757 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186897880539 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136801541426 0.112833075102 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86411891319 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499036608863 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 59.3041875394 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5652173913 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8205812176 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.173913043 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5652173913 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 49.154812767 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.21714285714 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351744496705 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0878254166241 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0459420495351 0.0752933317313 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464442133864 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111147213621 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131107007906 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106465951797 0.0781384742642 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.439934221387 0.336927656856 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0347063654582 0.067059652881 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25527382477 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750019499993 0.0618886996521 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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