There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people's health and well-being.
What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?
The trend in usage of cars increasing over the years. There is no wonder that, in future car will become a necessity in human life. Today, it is evident that, each and every family has a car. On an extreme scenario, some families own two or more cars. The pollution caused by cars to both society and environment is massive. So, appropriate actions should be formulated to discourage increase usage.
One such action should be to organize awareness campaign to car owners on the amount of affect they cause to extend world by increase usage. This campaign should be viral in social print and visual media. Publish the affect of global warming and health concerns due to fuel emissions.
Other such action should be the financial implications. Additional tax scheme should be legalized for any externalities caused by car users. The tax should be charged for each kilometers they travel in car.This tax should only be implemented for cars operated by fuel.
Furthermore, bi-annual test should be made mandatory to all car users, except electric cars. Addition to that, a random check by police should be made to verify whether the actions are adequately followed by people. A huge financial punishment should be legalized against the people, who do not follow this laws.
In conclusion, the usage of cars should be curtailed by formalizing several actions such as financial burden and creating awareness on affects. By doing so, people should be encouraged to purchase emission free electric cars, which are comparatively less harmful.
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262411347518 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.170212765957 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102836879433 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0283687943262 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0106382978723 0.0437548338989 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.109929078014 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0602836879433 0.0403226058552 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69411011496 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354609929078 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0921985815603 0.0861772015684 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0460992907801 0.021408717616 215% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00709219858156 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1543.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09881422925 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.430830039526 0.374742101984 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252964426877 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197628458498 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122529644269 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69411011496 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 62.8200192887 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8823529412 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3736223265 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.294117647059 0.814263465372 36% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 40.1787956289 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 2.06779661017 1.69124875643 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26998303277 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105642445728 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.085164292495 0.0668466124924 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527658960229 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15750601797 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105046257394 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469100939409 0.0742795772207 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287716749212 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.039250499574 0.0638462369009 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171849671369 0.228012699653 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631579416943 0.058150111329 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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