Decisions are taken based on emotions or logic.Decisions taken based on emotions are foolish.

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Decisions are taken based on emotions or logic.Decisions taken based on emotions are foolish.

Human beings are an unique creation of nature.We have the highest intelligence available among all other species.Since the dawn of mankind we have been discovering various ways to improve our living conditions.After ages of development and hard work we have finally reached a place where we really consider ourselves civilized,educated and social.We have reached this place because proper decisions were taken by our forefathers.Thus we see that certain decisions impact our lives significantly and thus they must be taken carefully.In today's era of Information technology and globalization,the world around us really moves very fast and we all need to be in pace with others in order to survive in this world.For this,correct decision making capability is very important as a wrong decision can ruin our life.People take decisions in two different ways,one is based on emotion and the other is based on logic.Both has it's pros and cons which i am going to discuss over here.

When we take decisions based on our emotion we often forget about the logical fallacies involved and we get carried away by what our heart is telling us to do.Example we might forgive a cheating spouse/partner just because we love them too much or we might buy our children a very expensive toy,knowing that we are pretty tight on our budget or we might forgive a family member for his/her serious crimes and not inform the police.Thus we see that in these cases the decisions taken based on emotion might prove to be troublesome for us or might just be bad in general.While taking decisions based on logic,we usually think of the situation more analytically and we look for it's practical feasibility ,for example administrative decisions require higher degree of practical thinking and so does other legal or technical jobs.Even when managing a family we have to think practically about the costs involved and utilization of resources.But this does not mean that decisions taken based on emotions are always bad,for example when our family members ask us to take us to a vacation,our practical sense might say that it is better to save the money instead of uselessly spending on our family members,but here we must take the decision based on our emotion,as we are all emotional beings who wants to be loved and we must value other's emotions as well.In this instance decision taken based on emotion will provide far greater happiness.Thus I conclude by saying that it is not always foolish to take decisions based on emotions,but we must be careful and judge the situation as well.

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in general']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208888888889 0.240241500013 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.208888888889 0.157235817809 133% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0822222222222 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0711111111111 0.0497285424764 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.102222222222 0.0444667217837 230% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108888888889 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0688888888889 0.0406280797675 170% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03309176827 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0266666666667 0.030933414821 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0688888888889 0.0997080785238 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266666666667 0.0249443105267 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155555555556 0.0148568991511 105% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2563.0 2732.02544248 94% => OK
No of words: 425.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03058823529 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338823529412 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268235294118 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185882352941 0.200843997647 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141176470588 0.132149295362 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03309176827 2.79330140395 109% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524705882353 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 59.7695196073 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6194690265 10% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 212.5 23.380412469 909% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 304.5 59.4972553346 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 1281.5 141.124799967 908% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 212.5 23.380412469 909% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.5 0.674092028746 816% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.94800884956 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.21349557522 671% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 239.323529412 51.4728631049 465% => OK
Elegance: 1.01162790698 1.64882698954 61% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260879377236 0.391690518653 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.528704872225 0.123202303941 429% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0 0.077325440228 0% => Sentences are so close to each other.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 6.13140705829e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213546278642 0.161403998019 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770301195045 0.0892212321368 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.528704872225 0.385218514788 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0692045440612 0% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213546278642 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770301195045 0.0653680567796 118% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 2.0 13.5995575221 15% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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