People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
At the 20th and 21st centuries, with the development of human’s modern society, more and more people tend to work hardly. There is no doubt that one of the most significant reasons of working is accumulating a horde of money to experience independent life. Actually, people’s attitudes toward the reasons for working are widely varied from person to person. In my vantage point, developing social skills as well as improving self-esteem motivates people to work.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to choose a job is improving their social skills. As a matter of fact, the human being is by nature gregarious. It is crystal-clear that in a workplace, people can get familiar with the different person who has diverse viewpoints; also, they can make new friends, spend time with each other and share their ideas. Consider companies which provide some opportunities for its employees to travel abroad for the mission. Not only can they broaden their horizon by socializing with experts, but also they can cement their relationship with their friends during the expedition. To illustrate more, even at the beginning of the trip in order to shed their fears of being in an airplane, for example, they can start a conversation with their colleagues and discuss how they can seize opportunities that are provided for the company in the competitive market or how they can make headway in a long run. Therefore, they can fortify their social skills by working.
Another subtle point is that people can fortify their self-esteem through working. Undoubtedly, in today modern world with its galloping progress, jobs are being specialized and complicated so much so that everyone in charge of a particular job should enjoy a great amount of experience in that field, so working provides an opportunity for people to prove their abilities and feel pleased with themselves. According to recent research conducted in my country, psychologists are in the conviction that person who works 40 hours in a week are by far more confident than an unemployed person. In my own experience, when I graduated from university I could not find a job for 2 years and I had difficult times in period of time, because I felt that I was a useless person for my society; however, being hired in a company could effectively boost my moral, and I little by little learned how to struggle for my dreams. That is to say, the sense of accomplishment which is gained from making progress in a job can raise their self-esteem.
In a nutshell, in the competitive world of today having a valuable job is a vital goal for all of people. Everyone has own reasons for choosing a work. Actually, some people work avidly for acquiring money but earning money is not a crucial factor for a vast number of people. For example, why they choose to be a teacher whereas they know this job does not have a high income? In fact, some people do not seem to mind about the amount of money which they earn but surely they feel content about themselves and have respect in society. In fact, in my vantage point, improving social skills and feeling personal satisfaction are main factors for working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'in fact', 'no doubt', 'as a matter of fact', 'as well as', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212271973466 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.16583747927 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0796019900498 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0480928689884 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0663349917081 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145936981758 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0547263681592 0.0351676179071 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77993106275 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0248756218905 0.0309702414327 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0016583747927 0.00188951952338 88% => OK
Determiners: 0.0845771144279 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0215588723051 0.0209618222197 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0199004975124 0.0139019557991 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3182.0 2387.08602151 133% => OK
No of words: 543.0 408.028673835 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86003683241 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34438305709 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243093922652 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16758747698 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1197053407 0.112833075102 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77993106275 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497237569061 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 59.8477558004 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6818181818 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.7118389747 48.84282405 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.636363636 120.699889404 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6818181818 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.644075263715 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.991210447 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.47337278107 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267308989595 0.300154397459 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124103094938 0.103427244359 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0824895322678 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.468985907437 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133165079483 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103401122132 0.114077575197 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542577493628 0.0781384742642 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362080277758 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0354506926591 0.067059652881 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207390924982 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676412990242 0.0618886996521 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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