with the development of the technology, people have accomplished many great achievements to make the world better place to live such as in computer science, manufacture, and machine. the issue whether life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children or not aroused much controversy among different people with different cultures, perspective, and different ages. Some contend that the life in the past easier than today due to the absence of the fierce competitions that present in our world today, and their dreams were so simple. However, I completely agree that the life is easier now than it was when our grandparents were children since the development of the technology that contributes to making our life more convenient and a single world culture.
The development of the technology has generally enhanced people's living conditions, making our life more convenient. For example, with a highly developed vehicle such as fast-train and jet airplane, we can go to work in a place far away from our house in some minutes or travel from one country to another in several hours, while it took our ancestors several months or even years in the ancient time. Electrical appliances and tools, ranging from washing machines to microwave ovens, also provide convenience for us. No longer do we need to go down to the river to wash our clothes on the rocks or to spend a lot of time heating our food with wood and charcoal. Nowadays, our daily chores become merely simple tasks, needing only very little efforts in our life. It is technology that has cleared away the barrier the once prevented people from leading a convenient life.
In addition to the convenience, technology development has significantly facilitated the communication among the people from all over the world, which has resulted in a single world culture. As an example, people can chat with a friend or a stranger who live abroad over the phone, or the internet, and they can see and listen to him through the camera and the microphone attached to the computer which was not present in the past. the people in the past have to go visit each other only since it is the only way for communicating. Nowadays, the ease of communication and sharing ideas help one culture to learn from other culture and bring the world together. More specifically people used to wear their local custom in the past, After they can see each other through TV, nowadays T-shirt and blue jeans have become a symbol of universal customs for the people, which is concrete example that the modern technology is creating a single world culture.
As all things considered, in the past while there is intimacy atmosphere due to visiting each other, and the slow-pace environment, they do not enjoy their life due to the absence of the technology. With the development of the technology, people can enjoy more convenience, and turn the world into a global village, and makes the world a much better place to live.
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Essay evaluation report
make the world better place to live
make the world a better place to live
Some contend that the life in the past easier
Some contend that the life in the past is easier
that has cleared away the barrier the once prevented people from leading a convenient life.
that has cleared away the barrier that once prevented people from leading a convenient life.
which is concrete example
which is a concrete example
while there is intimacy atmosphere
while there is an intimacy atmosphere
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 507 350
No. of Characters: 2435 1500
No. of Different Words: 233 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.745 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.803 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.645 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 160 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 54 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.955 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.581 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.183 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
with the development of the technology, peop...
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Suggestion: The
...uter science, manufacture, and machine. the issue whether life today is easier and ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nvenient and a single world culture. The development of the technology has ge...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople from leading a convenient life. In addition to the convenience, technolo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...uter which was not present in the past. the people in the past have to go visit eac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... is creating a single world culture. As all things considered, in the past wh...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...world a much better place to live.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241877256318 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.137184115523 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0830324909747 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.057761732852 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0487364620939 0.0685040099705 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113718411552 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0361010830325 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73563975935 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0361010830325 0.0309702414327 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00361010830325 0.00188951952338 191% => OK
Determiners: 0.117328519856 0.0887237588012 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00902527075812 0.0209618222197 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162454873646 0.0139019557991 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3023.0 2387.08602151 127% => OK
No of words: 507.0 408.028673835 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96252465483 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331360946746 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236686390533 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167652859961 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120315581854 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73563975935 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475345167653 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.2187110338 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 29.8235294118 20.5533526081 145% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7820725115 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.823529412 120.699889404 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8235294118 20.5533526081 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.644075263715 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 53.492168465 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.60740740741 1.45489161554 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29399924799 0.300154397459 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160515654579 0.103427244359 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0986199495547 0.0752933317313 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59744348294 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160523447404 0.151897553556 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138550418213 0.114077575197 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821692924525 0.0781384742642 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.504927265338 0.336927656856 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0939771579238 0.067059652881 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225990718992 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839625462667 0.0618886996521 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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