The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Today's youth is a mix blend of leaders, rulers, armed men, doctors, engineers, scholar and researchers. This youth is always seen competing now and then with their fellow mates to thrive for success. But somewhere in the midst of everything, what is missing is the sense of cooperation, a sense of general complaiscence.
It is assertive of the author saying that in order to to prepare your furtive youth for leadership in government, industry or any other field, one needs to sow seeds of warmth and cooperation into their minds. But the second part of the sentence does make me diagree to some extent as competition is necessary to move ahead in life, without competition we cannot make out our worth in a society, where do a person stands. Certainly, this competition should only be a healthy one, rather it must not harm the society.
Taking the first part of the sentence into consideration, we can assertively say that cooperation is a key to unity in society. All sections of the society, whether it is governement or public, all are fingers of one hand, or can say arms of a nation. There needs to be unity in them, which demands cooperation of one sector of society with the other.
For example, the industrial advancement leads to production of various new goods and services which have not been reported earlier. If the government is notfied with the advancements and innovations, it can protect its wealth from other nations and certainly benefit its nation from it. But if these advancements remain unnoticed, the innovations do not actually remain novel and some other nation imposes rights over its ownership by dveloping a similar copy of it. So, leadership and cooperation goes hand in hand.
A political leader if overlooks the problems of his people will surely not be appreciated by people of his society. In order to be a good leader one needs to witness all their problems and try to eradicate them. Now if the leader is genuinely trying to look over society's problems and the people do not cooperate with him, this wont work for long. In a society, every venture is a joint venture, one needs to be cooperative with others in such acts. If each individual is concerned about his or her problems and try competing with others, no societal problem can be resolved unless each individual copperates and works upon it. As we have heard the saying "More strength lies in a fist of a hand which cotains five figures than if each fingure alone"
Conclusively, It is best for society to work with a sense of cooperation for all than to work with competition, but on the contrary I must menation that only negative competition is one which harms the society, positive competition never does so.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217557251908 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.156488549618 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0667938931298 0.0880659088768 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0553435114504 0.0497285424764 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0534351145038 0.0444667217837 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135496183206 0.12292977631 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0324427480916 0.0406280797675 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80119619035 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030534351145 0.030933414821 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00381679389313 0.0016655270985 229% => OK
Determiners: 0.0973282442748 0.0997080785238 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0171755725191 0.0249443105267 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114503816794 0.0148568991511 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2732.0 2732.02544248 100% => OK
No of words: 469.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82515991471 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324093816631 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249466950959 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183368869936 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115138592751 0.132149295362 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80119619035 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 219.290929204 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513859275053 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 59.8408674224 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6842105263 23.380412469 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8619533135 59.4972553346 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.789473684 141.124799967 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6842105263 23.380412469 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 49.6309056223 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.45323741007 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457551986619 0.391690518653 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103000456655 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0657921460709 0.077325440228 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552195512209 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162377519749 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164102099587 0.161403998019 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805793885665 0.0892212321368 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288173341479 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0701915414816 0.0692045440612 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276045332528 0.275328986314 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567388642231 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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