There is some disagreement over whether having optimistic inclination when people have a failure is more crucial factor than achieving success. Of course, it is true that getting successful results is important qualification in any situation in our lives. From my view, however, having a positive and happy mind is more necessary qualification than acquiring success.
To begin, it is undeniable that optimism allows people to overcome their failures or unexpected and undesirable situations. When it comes to people who can optimistically assess their fail, they would know how to deal with it to change it from a fail to a chance to succeed. On the other hand, other people not only are easily frustrated by their minor mistake or fail but also do not have a way to overcome it. According to a study conducted by a team of researchers at Harvard University, it reveals that people who can positively assess their own mistakes or fails tend to easily overcome those situations. On the other side, others who often have negative mind with their fails, easily be frustrated by those fails. This implies that optimism of people contribute to them to know how to overcome fails.
Furthermore, it is necessary qualification for any successful people to view a positive aspect of a fail. Regard to successful person in our society, they have to realize that a failure is the best teacher to learn how to get a success when people positively evaluate them. On the other hand, when they negatively assess a result when it is not successful, it can play a significant role in collapsing a whole group or company. For instance, we can easily observed that a manager of a company who only thinks a success, a simple negative influence resulted to a drastically reduced its outcome. Further, the company did not overcome the situation, which could lead it to close. If the manager considered a positive side of the fail and tried to a way overcome it, the company could avoid this situation. As the example shows, a qualification to view positive sides of failures is necessary to get constant success.
To sum, making a successful result is important factor to everyone, however, we cannot ignore the importance having a positive mind when we have troubles or fails.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y qualification than acquiring success. To begin, it is undeniable that optimism...
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Suggestion: observe
...or company. For instance, we can easily observed that a manager of a company who only th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for instance', 'of course', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210900473934 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.168246445498 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0829383886256 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0545023696682 0.046263068375 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0687203791469 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0876777251185 0.118717715034 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0308056872038 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87716223962 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0592417061611 0.0309702414327 191% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0995260663507 0.0887237588012 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189573459716 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0331753554502 0.0139019557991 239% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2263.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 382.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92408376963 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376963350785 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267015706806 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212041884817 0.174417080927 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123036649215 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87716223962 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476439790576 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.5910058142 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4705882353 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7102768999 48.84282405 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.117647059 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 49.1721589159 45.7405998639 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.13008130081 1.45489161554 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272857652616 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142881870271 0.103427244359 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0789092189488 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562338560574 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14236146353 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112745008122 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469069879681 0.0781384742642 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.285133161373 0.336927656856 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.163361831702 0.067059652881 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18855864704 0.210909579961 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350456964752 0.0618886996521 57% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.