On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter
• Describe the item you lost
• Explain how you lost it
• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Mr. Eastwood,
I’m writing to you in order to inform that I’ve recently lost my smartphone, while I was on my trip to France. As you probably aware, I was the only one tourist who choose the most expansive price of the travel ticket, which covered lost items.
The model of my device is “Meizu M3 Note”, black color. Sorry to say, I don’t know it’s serial number. In case if you need it, I can call support service and ask them to figure out all information available about my phone.
Last place I saw my device was my hotel’s room. I think I left it in a middle drawer near my bed. It also could be on the cuisine table near a fridge. I used to charge it there and there was also wi-fi connection better.
If you able to find my cell phone, I will glad to take it back. There are a lot of my private data left and I don’t want to recover it. You can send me it on my home address that I used for my registration. In case you can’t find it, I would like to get a full refund of the phone’s price. You can return money to my credit card.
Thank you in advance for considering my situation.
Your sincere, Max Ololoev
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... situation. Your sincere, Max Ololoev
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214035087719 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.150877192982 0.167888034529 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0561403508772 0.0606518309736 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0280701754386 0.0506257000042 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.168421052632 0.118615021944 142% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0842105263158 0.107062808482 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0105263157895 0.041066498444 26% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.53566796811 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385964912281 0.0385302599488 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00350877192982 0.00132118243153 266% => OK
Determiners: 0.0385964912281 0.0714148451538 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245614035088 0.0191574576366 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00701754385965 0.00930345855455 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1188.0 1141.60824742 104% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.134020619 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35135135135 5.53046319177 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.256756756757 0.284621296913 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171171171171 0.211203875043 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0990990990991 0.133321485273 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0810810810811 0.0843313296314 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53566796811 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 65.0063168429 62.8969750728 103% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.875 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0107403851 44.7399317507 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 90.9928171075 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.613754768223 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 30.9921171171 37.5504026743 83% => OK
Elegance: 0.888888888889 1.13073093955 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283605670775 0.331212695627 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0869404971384 0.0927372745006 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0417951764145 0.0736520305886 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587931006719 0.579516596996 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165367762605 0.180689518051 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105193454813 0.122183219658 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695311879134 0.0765303033291 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.196349374122 0.211926503985 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103720365607 0.0737400523855 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15252091916 0.203819188451 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101280516487 0.067151250289 151% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.