Issue - "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The children of a nation are its future. Along with becoming independent and successful, they are also the ones carrying the responsibility of running the nation in future times. Therefore, it is very important that we build a strong foundation in their formative years of growth. Education plays an important role in laying the base of any child's future. I believe that the curriculum followed throughout the nation should be similar but schools should have the freedom to change it to a certain extent.
Having a uniform curriculum has many benefits. It determines the standard level which is required by the student to clear before he is ready to take the next step in academic life. A common curriculum ensures a stable and universal learning for all children across the nation. There are many students who attend different schools in their childhood, due to their parents having a transferable job. This is where the idea of common curriculum has its most cited advantage, as the studies of the child will not be spoiled due to change of schools. If the guidelines are different for different schools, then the child will face problems in understanding the new curriculum, and this might damage his mental state of learning.
Today is an age of competition. Students have to face high level of competition in changing gears of education from school life to college life. There are a lot of entrance examinations been taken to check the eligibility criteria of the students. Having a common curriculum will ensure that all the students taking an entrance examination will be evaluated at the same level and there will be no discrepency.
However, I also feel that following the national guidelines of a common curriculum, the schools should have the liberty to change or modify the curriculum to a certain extent for the betterment of the students. Each student is different in his capabilities. Enforcing a student good in History to take up a subject of Biology will not do any good to the student as well as the nation. Keeping the interests of the students in mind, the curriculum should be molded in a way that they retain the students interests.
In the end, I would like to conclude that a uniform curriculum is very important at a national level. However, at the same time, schools should also be allowed to mold the curriculum to a certain extent to keep the students interested.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231818181818 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.159090909091 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0880659088768 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0318181818182 0.0497285424764 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0386363636364 0.0444667217837 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115909090909 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.05 0.0406280797675 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82499300084 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0386363636364 0.030933414821 125% => OK
Particles: 0.00227272727273 0.0016655270985 136% => OK
Determiners: 0.147727272727 0.0997080785238 148% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0295454545455 0.0249443105267 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00681818181818 0.0148568991511 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2420.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 407.0 452.878318584 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94594594595 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373464373464 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280098280098 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19656019656 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130221130221 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82499300084 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474201474201 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 51.3370762084 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.380952381 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.404955427 59.4972553346 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.238095238 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 47.3907803908 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.73267326733 1.64882698954 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476539404924 0.391690518653 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102071004527 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0817600459177 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529779213948 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170616203495 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187438819892 0.161403998019 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102130204319 0.0892212321368 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458043872172 0.385218514788 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0395105108214 0.0692045440612 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341139640252 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502637093885 0.0653680567796 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.