Issue - "A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The statement above says that a person who has knowingly committed a crime should not retain any of the civil rights and the right to benefit from his or her own labor. Laws are the basic principles which govern the society and are for the smooth functioning of the society. However, I partially agree to the above stated information as the atonement depends on the seriousness of the crime committed.
A person who has knowingly committed a crime should be rightfully convicted with his/her sins under the law. All people should abide by the laws made for the betterment of the society and any person caught in violation of these laws should be held responsible and punished. For this reason, I agree with the author's point of punishing the criminal.
However, atonement of their crimes should also be allowed considering the seriousness of the crime committed. For example, a person who has committed a murder and a person who has violated a traffic rule, cannot be punished in the same manner. Cancellation of civil rights should be the case for very serious nature of crimes committed.
On the contrary, there are instances where a person has committed a crime knowingly but cannot be judged guilty. There can be instances where a person has injured/killed another person in total self defence. Under such circumstances taking away the civil rights of the person convicted should not be done. There are many jail laws which allow inmates do various jobs during their jail-time. This can help the person convicted to have self realization of his/her actions and help them to be a better person. So, taking away the civil rights or right to benefit from their own labor is not recommended for those who are been charged for not so serious crimes.
In conclusion, I would say that the laws should be stringent enough to punish any criminal who commits a crime knowingly but cancellation of civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor should be based on the seriousness of the crime committed and also considering the situation in which the crime was committed.
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- Issue - "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college."Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based 50
- Issue - "A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor."Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with t 50
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214833759591 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.191815856777 0.157235817809 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0639386189258 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0537084398977 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383631713555 0.0444667217837 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107416879795 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0818414322251 0.0406280797675 201% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.61781500392 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0179028132992 0.030933414821 58% => OK
Particles: 0.00255754475703 0.0016655270985 154% => OK
Determiners: 0.13810741688 0.0997080785238 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0358056265985 0.0249443105267 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0281329923274 0.0148568991511 189% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2101.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 361.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81994459834 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337950138504 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.213296398892 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152354570637 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130193905817 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61781500392 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 219.290929204 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421052631579 0.48968727796 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.9685173344 55.4138127331 78% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5625 23.380412469 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.125907251 59.4972553346 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.3125 141.124799967 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 23.380412469 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.674092028746 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 43.8921398892 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.42342342342 1.64882698954 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467282723142 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109740698617 0.123202303941 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0800364427927 0.077325440228 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.598653064289 0.547984918172 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170635921677 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204110474805 0.161403998019 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126985432259 0.0892212321368 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.449521923829 0.385218514788 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.075135484395 0.0692045440612 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340352615578 0.275328986314 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104251165428 0.0653680567796 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.