The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Humans, by birth, require competition to motivate themselves to reach the peak of their abilities. However, in a globalized world that we live in right now, mutual cooperation is highly necessary for everybody. So, I agree with the claim that we should instill a sense of cooperation in our young generation.
One of the most essential characteristics of a good leader is that he gives as much importance to the views of his opponents as he gives to those of his own. This is even more vital in the case of leading the government, which is basically leading the country itself. Constructive criticism between the government and the opposition is certainly beneficial for the country, but, sadly, in the attempt to demean each other in the eyes of the general mass, both parties completely forget that and just blindly blame each other. As a result, the sufferings of the citizens such as poverty, unemployment, terrorism etc. go unnoticed. Therefore, if we teach our youth to cooperate with each other right from the beginning, this will assist them in learning to respect other people's opinions and work hand-in-hand with them for the betterment of the country and themselves, when they grow up and go on to lead the country.
In addition to that, the growth of different industries depend on each other a lot. In fact, their fates are interconnected with each other in many ways. For instance, an automobile industry requires several other industries to provide them with many necessary components such as tires, nuts and bolts, materials for the passenger seats etc. If there is any miscommunication between the industries due to stiff competition and the supplying industry doesn't provide these components on time, then ultimately the automobile industry would suffer tremendously. So, in such cases, mutual cooperation is very important.
However, there are a few merits of instilling competition in the youth as well. One such merit is that competition normally tends to bring out the best in human beings. In the attempt to transcend each other, humans achieve the unthinkable. The competition between the American and Russian scientists for the space expeditions in the 1960s can be cited as an example here.
Although, a healthy competition is a good thing, cooperating with each other can be far more important for the success of different entities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be far more important for the success of different entities.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213793103448 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.112643678161 0.157235817809 72% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103448275862 0.0880659088768 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0620689655172 0.0497285424764 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0436781609195 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144827586207 0.12292977631 118% => OK
Participles: 0.016091954023 0.0406280797675 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.97063783175 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298850574713 0.030933414821 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00229885057471 0.0016655270985 138% => OK
Determiners: 0.133333333333 0.0997080785238 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114942528736 0.0249443105267 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00459770114943 0.0148568991511 31% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2368.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 388.0 452.878318584 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10309278351 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340206185567 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283505154639 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211340206186 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.170103092784 0.132149295362 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97063783175 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 219.290929204 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541237113402 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 60.8137399353 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4210526316 23.380412469 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2229114812 59.4972553346 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.631578947 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 23.380412469 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.674092028746 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 48.7715680955 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.71578947368 1.64882698954 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407705979961 0.391690518653 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110856099147 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0710287523718 0.077325440228 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548874791534 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191223276655 0.149214159877 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159141065648 0.161403998019 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521266823608 0.0892212321368 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354201140822 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0852103011798 0.0692045440612 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26959755011 0.275328986314 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557703000077 0.0653680567796 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.