the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010. summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps of village of Stokeford from 1930 and 2010 shoes how the village changed in the course of 80 years.

We can see from these maps that Stokeford was definitely modernized and there was a significant increase in the population by looking at the number of new houses.

In 1930, Stakeford had a large farmland area near the River Stoke and next to the primary school which in 2010 was replaced by new houses to accommodate new settlers. Also for this purpose, shops next to post office was also removed. The gardens were also shrunked to add few more houses. The large house inside the garden was extended and was converted to a retirement home.

In 80 years, few of the things remained the same like the bridge and the post office. However, the primary school was expanded and modernised.

Votes
Average: 5.2 (4 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...new houses to accommodate new settlers. Also for this purpose, shops next to post of...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233766233766 0.268076937826 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.155844155844 0.116061578633 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0844155844156 0.0759168565197 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0324675324675 0.0366838410393 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00649350649351 0.0131127313244 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136363636364 0.155750635184 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0584415584416 0.0379272487307 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41200010264 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324675324675 0.0210936926555 154% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.12987012987 0.0948980150116 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00649350649351 0.00437022459523 149% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012987012987 0.00967000014798 134% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 805.0 1161.00487805 69% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.9 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66901408451 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73763899035 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30985915493 0.337110787985 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225352112676 0.247514529752 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154929577465 0.171178102325 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0845070422535 0.112407865282 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41200010264 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598591549296 0.546246751206 110% => OK
Word variations: 50.2965027873 49.3433353143 102% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 17.75 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7610389598 42.9750493124 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 135.714022679 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 23.0094962315 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 40.2852112676 47.7609492067 84% => OK
Elegance: 2.2 2.94281807926 75% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407336867413 0.418131533498 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.16890642203 0.181151798455 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.058320652071 0.0850326197045 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.71121796115 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.208716240811 0.157042692854 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218154581653 0.228904883108 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129886532848 0.108899403657 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302285031566 0.367819155151 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0410348974211 0.0812612215331 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314126848976 0.316326947829 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103019444547 0.0921553760075 112% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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