These days Parents are more concerned with their children’s’ up-bringing than before. Taking care of the children seems necessary. Child-care training course for parents can be the best way to update them with this matter. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with it? Give your opinion and where necessary give examples to support it
Today’s children are tomorrow’s citizens. It is the responsibility of the parents to bring them up as productive members as they are considered as the first teachers of a child. Some people believe that childcare training courses best way to teach the parents, how to handle these young minds, but, others oppose. However, I completely agree with the given notion.
To begin with, usually parents are grown up people with their own perceptions of life. Most of them leading leaving separately from their parents and don’t know how to handle the children. These courses give them an opportuni...
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chechi...be cautious putting 'the 'in front of superlatives.
...we all know that parents are grown up..so irrelevant emphasizing of certain words
try to avoid using present continuous tense(ing forms) excluding gerund forms
always try to write in simple present.
good luck..
please correct my essay too..
Sentence: Young children learn skills, manners and discipline from their brothers or sisters, with are disappeared now.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', present tense, 2nd person singular or all
Suggestion: Refer to with and are
Sentence: Hence, I strongly believe that this courses are the best way to update the child care knowledge in young parents.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and courses
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Category: Excellent Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1861 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.846 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.521 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.455 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.75 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.494 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
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