Lectures were the traditional way to teach large number of students in the past. Now new technology is being used to teach students. Is it a positive or negative development?
Teaching is the transfering of informations from one to another. But now new technologies are being introduced to teach large number of students at the same time. I will discuss in detail why I feel the right combination of these two bring wounderful results.
Education mould the individual and shape the character of a person. Teachers are professionals, who are trained to handle the students. They are not only impart academic knowledge but also moral values. Besides, they know the strength and weakness of each student and teach them accordingly, including special attention to poor academic pupils. Forthermore, for students, teacher is not only a person who help them in their studies, but also, a role model. For instance, they try to immitate dress code, walking style, intonation and so on. Teachers guide them and teach them towards the desirable behavior in the society, like helping mentality, respect to others, time management, and so forth. These imoptant qualities make them a good human being.
However,technologies are inevitable for the betterment of our life. Computer and the Internet bring informations about anything under the world in our finger tips. It is a good academic tool for students as well as teachers. To teach a large number of students over head projectors, C.D players, slides and so on, are very much helpful. It gives comfort and convenience to both teachers and pupiles. At the same time, the instruction and inspiration of a person called teacher is essential to help the students to use these technologies effectively. Otherwise, students needed high determination and self motivation, which is difficult to see in pupils,especially, young children.
To conclude,technologies are benificial to teach a large number of students. But, itself alone is not sufficient for the same.The presence of a teacher, is demanding for effective teaching and learning process. If we are able to mix these two, in a good way, it will give better results than using alone.
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Thankyou so much for your correction..
I know that i am a ' L.K.G' student in typing abd uploading essays..so times off topic too. But i will try..
Thanks a lot..
Tessy
Sentence: Forthermore, for students, teacher is not only a person who help them in their studies, but also, a role model.
Description: The fragment who help them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace help with verb, past tense
Sentence: I will discuss in detail why I feel the right combination of these two bring wounderful results.
Error: wounderful Suggestion: wonderful
Sentence: For instance, they try to immitate dress code, walking style, intonation and so on.
Error: immitate Suggestion: imitate
Sentence: These imoptant qualities make them a good human being.
Error: imoptant Suggestion: important
Sentence: To conclude,technologies are benificial to teach a large number of students.
Error: benificial Suggestion: beneficial
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Read the topic carefully before you write: Now new technology is being used to teach students. Is it(new technology) a positive or negative development?
so one paragraph you should talk positive development of new technology, and one paragraph you should talk negative development of new technology, well, you didn't organize well of the essay. The good thing of teachers doesn't mean the negative development of new technology. That's the reason Sentence-Text Coherence is low: 0.275. It is a little bit out of topic.
Your language is great. but when you are writing an essay, you need to write the essay straight forward. Don't go far away.
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