Nowadays, thanks to the development of technology and economic globalization, we break the differences of countries. In a other word, we share the same things no matter where are we come from.
Basically, It's a good new for us, we have more choices and because of this, we can pursue the qualities of products by comparing them. On the other hand, the companies must improve their products actively to fit costumers' demands and make sure they are competitive. And it will help to form a prosperous market. What's more, it can reduce the damages of disasters in some cases. For instance, we don't need to afraid of starving for a poor harvest, because we can import crops from other countries. Economic globalization also benefit the communication among varies cultures, in which more innovations will come up.
However, there are some problems emerge which can not be ignore. The economy in each country might be more sensitive than before. Other countries can't escape the economic crises caused by one of them, more or less. Besides, the differences between cultures are likely to disappear gradually. The cultures of developing countries might lose their independence and submit to the ones developed countries for the reason of invading of products.
Over all, this phenomenon can not be avoid, and it is positive in a long term. But accompany by the advantages, it still has some problems which are waiting us to overcome.
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... break the differences of countries. In a other word, we share the same things no...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...r where are we come from. Basically, Its a good new for us, we have more choices...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... will help to form a prosperous market. Whats more, it can reduce the damages of disa...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sasters in some cases. For instance, we dont need to afraid of starving for a poor h...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... sensitive than before. Other countries cant escape the economic crises caused by on...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'for instance', 'in some cases', 'more or less', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207407407407 0.247107183377 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.137037037037 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0777777777778 0.0946595960268 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0481481481481 0.0501214627716 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0703703703704 0.0437548338989 161% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.114814814815 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0185185185185 0.0403226058552 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.79994653272 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0259259259259 0.0326793684256 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0037037037037 0.00163938923432 226% => OK
Determiners: 0.107407407407 0.0861772015684 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.037037037037 0.021408717616 173% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148148148148 0.011925033212 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1430.0 1933.35771543 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 316.048096192 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.00840336134 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344537815126 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273109243697 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214285714286 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147058823529 0.137316102897 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79994653272 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 64.8466385781 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8666666667 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0537296632 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 127.492653851 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 43.1775910364 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.69124875643 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35415822093 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0674034106929 0.102741220458 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0387101167293 0.0668466124924 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487361583362 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142969603484 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132838943679 0.134430193775 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427397005603 0.0742795772207 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332328727428 0.324371583561 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0990164264477 0.0638462369009 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23555865703 0.228012699653 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414010073602 0.058150111329 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.