parents should be able to monitor and restrict which book, digital media or other information their children access at or check out at the library
The statement conclude, that the parents have to restricted the media nd book to study there children in library. I completely agree with this statement because today in 21st century there are lots of book and media which children should not to reed.
The primary reson why i agree is that today lots of book are in library which contain lots of love storiyes and other things which childeren not to read. As we know the book like 2 state , Half girlfriend which contain the love stories so childer think about this direction and they start this type of life and they lost the interest in the study. And other resones is that today also lots of book avialable in library which has the information about the made of bomb and use of rifel and other thing because of that the children also learn to use this gadjets and in future they use againt the anthrope.
Secondly, in 21st century there are lots of media which has to not show by thechildren like now in indian television the show name is crime petrol, The crime petrol contain the good work of the police but other way the crime petrol see the diffrent crime in our city and nation bacause of this show children learn about the all crime and many other things which they should not to watch. In the media there are lots of show which like crime petrol so perents has to restrict the show like this which has to not showen by the children.
In other ways media and book contain the lots of knowledge about the world and the nation which children has to known . The children has to read the book which contain the nation history and the lots of other thing which has to be helpfull the children in study and future life, And as we know the reading book is a ery good habbit so children has to read a book.
In conclusion, I agree that the parents should be able to restrict which book and medai or other information their children access or not, And perents has to be suggest good media and good book and give many other important information to his/her children for better future of his/her children.
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- parents should be able to monitor and restrict which book, digital media or other information their children access at or check out at the library 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (nd) must be used with a third-person verb: 'books'.
Suggestion: books
...parents have to restricted the media nd book to study there children in library. I ...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he media nd book to study there children in library. I completely agree with this...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of books'.
Suggestion: lots of books
...because today in 21st century there are lots of book and media which children should not to ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dia which children should not to reed. The primary reson why i agree is that to...
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Line 2, column 39, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... The primary reson why i agree is that today lots of book are in...
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Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of books'.
Suggestion: lots of books
...primary reson why i agree is that today lots of book are in library which contain lots of lo...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o read. As we know the book like 2 state , Half girlfriend which contain the love...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 2 state , Half girlfriend which contain the love stories so childer think about ...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of books'.
Suggestion: lots of books
...y. And other resones is that today also lots of book avialable in library which has the info...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n future they use againt the anthrope. Secondly, in 21st century there are lots...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich has to not showen by the children. In other ways media and book contain the...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d the nation which children has to known . The children has to read the book which...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...ch children has to known . The children has to read the book which contain the nati...
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Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ife, And as we know the reading book is a ery good habbit so children has to read...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...habbit so children has to read a book. In conclusion, I agree that the parents ...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o restrict which book and medai or other information their children access or not...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts has to be suggest good media and good book and give many other important infor...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as to', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.298734177215 0.240241500013 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.139240506329 0.157235817809 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0708860759494 0.0880659088768 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405063291139 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0253164556962 0.0444667217837 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126582278481 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.00506329113924 0.0406280797675 12% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.12056935855 2.79330140395 76% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0405063291139 0.030933414821 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103797468354 0.0997080785238 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00759493670886 0.0249443105267 30% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0354430379747 0.0148568991511 239% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2121.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 380.0 452.878318584 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58157894737 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.231578947368 0.366273622748 63% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.171052631579 0.280924506359 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1 0.200843997647 50% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0552631578947 0.132149295362 42% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.12056935855 2.79330140395 76% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 219.290929204 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.365789473684 0.48968727796 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.9784322936 55.4138127331 69% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.380412469 163% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.0764949913 59.4972553346 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 212.1 141.124799967 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 23.380412469 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.674092028746 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.21349557522 326% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.1052631579 51.4728631049 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.0987654321 1.64882698954 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353013363027 0.391690518653 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.32155722821 0.123202303941 261% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.128246323378 0.077325440228 166% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.827177613465 0.547984918172 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115003004282 0.149214159877 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214309970633 0.161403998019 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940140568812 0.0892212321368 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.474178125553 0.385218514788 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0310401919124 0.0692045440612 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274488221653 0.275328986314 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101290945849 0.0653680567796 155% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.