The lecture mentioned that many scientists had arguments about the points mentioned in the passage which prove that dinosaurs were in fact endotherms.
First of all, discovering dinosaurs fossils in polar region does not necessary prove that dinosaurs were endotherms, this is because back in the days these polar areas were much warmer than now a days. In specific part of the year these polar places were warm and when the weather become warm the dinosaurs could have immigrated or hibernate.
Secondly, The passage talked about the connection between endothermy and the position of the legs. The legs of all modern endothem as well as dinosaurs are positioned underneath its body. This body structure support more weight which allowed the dinosaurs to grow to larger sizes. large sizes were beneficial for dinosaurs. So having the legs underneath the body not on the side as other non endothermic reptiles does not prove that dinosaurs were endothermic.
Thirdly, The passage also mentioned the connection between endothermy and the bone structure. The bones of endotherms usually includes structures called haversian cannals, Which were truely found in dinosaurs fossils, but scientists also found growth rings in the dinosaurs bone structure which indicate periods of time when there were no growth or much slower growth and that mostly happened in cooler periods. In endotherm mammels there is usually consistent growth not very rapid growth in some periods and very slow or no growth in some other periods.
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does not necessary prove that
does not necessarily prove that
the weather become warm
the weather becomes warm
This body structure support more weight
This body structure supports more weight
The bones of endotherms usually includes structures
The bones of endotherms usually include structures
Sentence: In endotherm mammels there is usually consistent growth not very rapid growth in some periods and very slow or no growth in some other periods.
Error: mammels Suggestion: mammals
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 242 250
No. of Characters: 1252 1200
No. of Different Words: 125 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.944 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.174 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.503 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.098 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.423 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...these polar areas were much warmer than now a days. In specific part of the year these pol...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...e polar areas were much warmer than now a days. In specific part of the year these pol...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Large
... the dinosaurs to grow to larger sizes. large sizes were beneficial for dinosaurs. So...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'in fact', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.285714285714 0.261695866417 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.138996138996 0.158904122519 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100386100386 0.0723426182421 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0810810810811 0.0435111971325 186% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.003861003861 0.0277247811725 14% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.119691119691 0.128828473217 93% => OK
Participles: 0.030888030888 0.0370669169778 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57018482025 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00772200772201 0.0208969081088 37% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.127413127413 0.128158765124 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.003861003861 0.0158828679856 24% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.023166023166 0.0114777025283 202% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1526.0 1645.83664459 93% => OK
No of words: 242.0 271.125827815 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30578512397 6.08160592843 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376033057851 0.374372842146 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285123966942 0.287516216867 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219008264463 0.187439937562 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169421487603 0.113142543107 150% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57018482025 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54958677686 0.539623497131 102% => OK
Word variations: 53.0295931627 53.8517498576 98% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8418520482 49.3711431718 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.727272727 132.220823453 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.7502111507 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.878197800319 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 50.5123966942 50.5018328374 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.94827586207 1.90840788429 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.632290136817 0.549887131256 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.174125875659 0.142949733639 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0958957886229 0.0787303798458 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.627458891899 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.208830847665 0.139662658121 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.278859496264 0.266732575781 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874878557717 0.103435571967 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.298939999796 0.414875509568 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0361330420473 0.0530846634433 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.418502337873 0.40443939384 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596839466523 0.0528353158467 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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