You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of fights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper.
- explain where do you live
- describe the problem
- give reasons why you do not want this development
.
Dear sir,
I am Bhumika Suryavanshi and I am a local resident of Shahibaug area where the development of the existing airport has been proposed by the Gujarat government. I am writing this letter in order to receive a media support from your newspaper to highlight the issues and concerns of local people against these developments.
I would like to explain some brief about our concern behind the discord with the proposed developments. Firstly, if you investigate, you will find there is a school in a vicinity of 3 km area from the existing airport. The increase in the number of flights leads to increase in the frequency of arrival and departure of flights during the day. The increase in noise will not only increase the disturbance to the study of school children, but also causes several listening and concentration related disorders among them in long run. Moreover, the population of this area is quite a high that it is considered as highly dense area for the traffic.So, increase in flight may cause increase in traffic of travellers during the day.
The airport is already well developed and the existing flight frequency are quite enough for the requirement of commutation of Ahmedabad. Hence, I feel this development is unnecessary and reason of damage to the local environment.
I request you to visit the area and take the opinion of local people to take the concern forward to the government.Your timely cooperation will be appreciated.
Yours faithfully
Bhumika suryavanshi
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
the existing flight frequency are quite enough
the existing flight frequencies are quite enough
I feel this development is unnecessary and reason of damage to the local environment.
I feel this development is unnecessary for the reasons of damage to the local environment.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 250 350
No. of Characters: 1221 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.976 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.884 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.823 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.721 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.723 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l people against these developments. I would like to explain some brief about ...
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Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ed as highly dense area for the traffic.So, increase in flight may cause increase ...
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Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Your
...e the concern forward to the government.Your timely cooperation will be appreciated....
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'i feel']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290566037736 0.220444632235 132% => OK
Verbs: 0.143396226415 0.167888034529 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0377358490566 0.0606518309736 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490566037736 0.0506257000042 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0490566037736 0.118615021944 41% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139622641509 0.107062808482 130% => OK
Participles: 0.0452830188679 0.041066498444 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97435273523 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0339622641509 0.0385302599488 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132075471698 0.0714148451538 185% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188679245283 0.0191574576366 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00377358490566 0.00930345855455 41% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1513.0 1141.60824742 133% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.134020619 120% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10080645161 5.53046319177 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78085437643 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370967741935 0.284621296913 130% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29435483871 0.211203875043 139% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201612903226 0.133321485273 151% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137096774194 0.0843313296314 163% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97435273523 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552419354839 0.622163163488 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.9322795374 62.8969750728 86% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5454545455 16.4300151701 137% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7516371539 44.7399317507 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 90.9928171075 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 16.4300151701 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.613754768223 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.09278350515 143% => OK
Readability: 51.9809384164 37.5504026743 138% => OK
Elegance: 1.96875 1.13073093955 174% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404002281782 0.331212695627 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.143946529614 0.0927372745006 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0885211471702 0.0736520305886 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.698089188664 0.579516596996 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160393876451 0.180689518051 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188641342535 0.122183219658 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774976113559 0.0765303033291 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.392531923096 0.211926503985 185% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0432010518062 0.0737400523855 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293373977117 0.203819188451 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298356384115 0.067151250289 44% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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